Linda continuae escrevendo mais

Linda historia adore amo este casal escreva mais sobre eles vc escreve muito bem

yes that is so cute great work

Nice passionate I liked it you could totally add on to this

So good I love it

yay! i want this! lanceXilana forever! thanks for making this :)(:

Haha I liked it! Comic-relief is always the best! I was so sad when this show was dropped, I wanted to know how they could possibly do this pairing, at least you got them together, yay!

Well done, though I thought mabe lance would have reacted more when he found out they were spying on him. But I did LOVE how lance told llana how he felt about her.

Honestly, on a scale 1to 10, I give it a 4. Heres why; I honestly think that a first kiss would definatly not involve tongue at all. Second, Lance was not moody enough for it to ever seem very accurate. And next, I think manny agree that their first kiss would be better if Ilana kissed it's the other way around, its seems strange. This story is not a bad one, but It's just not my type of story. I love the amount of Ilanca in it though! :D I just really wish they'ed bring back the show.

Loved it. I liked both your fan fics. Keep posting more:)

XD Very cute.

AWESOME! the beggining was hilarious, the middle was totally awesome and the end was totally romantic... mmmm... okay anayways, great story looking forward to more from you very very soon. i think the ending turned out fine, it was a little rushed but i don't think you screwed it up or anything, it's perfectly fine. everyone was in character, loved it :)