Fusco acting like he doesn't care about John but in his heart he respect the work that John and Finch are doing!

Thank you for this exceptional piece. I read all three different point of views and this is my favorite. It really feels like hearing Fusco think and I loved all the slang and the figures of speech you put in here. I also really enjoyed you delving into Fusco's character and explaining his motivation. Awesome work!

I love your story about Fusco and Reese, hope there will be more. May I translate this seires into Chinese? Thx

That ending is PERFECT! Wow.

Ah fantastic! Absolutely wonderfully written. Fusco's character is spot on and the event well played out. I look forward to reading more of you work. You're style reminds me of JD Robb (Nora Roberts) Thank you.

This was a great story and very well written. You had Fusco down perfectly, the way he talks and everything and I love how he was slightly lost when he wasn't in contact with Finch and Reese.

I didn't like that john or finch, hadn't kept in touch with them. Joss and lionel didn't know what shape john was in. If john needed time to recuperate, that was fine. Just let someone know you're ok. But lionel knew he had did good, that he had saved john's life. Things would go back to normal between them. Your story was fun to read, not many stories are fusco centered.

Great job on this story! Loved the characterizations!

Poor Fusco! Watching last night's episode I felt like I knew him better since reading your story. Working with Wonder Boy and the Professor has redeemed him, and you do a beautiful job of showing that here. I really love this story!

Wonderful, perfectly captures their relationship.

Great job! I loved this story. Super idea and you do them all so well. Thanks!

What a wonderful story! Loved Fusco's thoughts as always and you have him pegged beautifully. All is right with the world now that Wonderboy is back.

Great job with your characterization of Fusco to perfection. The last sentence in the story is perfect and Fusco all over. Also congrats of the tougher job including the possibilities of the reactions and expectations of the rest of the "fab four," without overtaking Fusco's spotlight in your story. Fusco is really a good cop and knows his business . . . I love it when someone gives him his "props." Looking forward to reading more from you.

Not bad, really - it's actually very good. I'm more of a hurt Harold-Fan, but this story is well written and good to read. Thank you!

Great story and perfect characterization. Can't wait to see what you post next!

Thanks for sharing,
SpaceCadet