Hey! I'm leaving a review over here because somehow I was unable to post a comment on your blog. You're one of my favorite authors but after reading this story I have to say, that I'm extremely disappointed. True, the story has good points like a good plot and providing inspiration to make changes for the betterment of your life. It also emphasizes that beauty is not limited to a skinny figure. These were the points that made me stick with the story till the end. Now, why am I disappointed? First, Bella is way too insecure and let's other people steam roll over her far too much. She over thinks every thing and creates trouble where there isn't any. Even though she had her good moments she isn't as strong as you try to portray her. Second, Edward is a royal douche who simply do mistake after mistake. The worst thing? He actually goes scot free! I honestly think after calling your girlfriend such a name, also in public he deserves a lot worse. Bella is too weak when it comes to him and their relationship. Third, the spelling and grammar mistakes! We both know you're not a novice when it comes to fan fiction. And I think you know the difference between YOU'RE & YOUR and SENSE & SINCE even though you don't show it. Did you even bother to read what you wrote or to run a simple spell check? I really don't think so. Why am I ranting so much? Because like I said before, you are one of my favorite authors and I truly expected better from you! So I really hope you'll read this review and consider it. Good Luck!

I love this story so much, but I can't find it. Please help.

I hope that we will get to read more of this story.

went to your site and read the whole story in one sitting. loved it so much!

I was right in the middle of this story when it got taken down, I really love it and want to finish it! Can you send me the link, I'm having trouble finding the facebook group or Wordpress.

Love all your stories and I will definitely follow you.

Cheers from the UK!

What's your FB name?
Can you PM it to me?
I LOVE your stories and need to catch up on a few!

oh :( i really hate that FF lets this happne...i get the hole rating thing, but that doesnt mean they leave the authors get hurt :(

i support your decision :) so hope to see you on TWC and your blog :)
hugs!

Fight the fine fight! Your work is worth it and we shall follow you wherever you shall lead. :)

Good luck with you writing. Looking forward to reading your stories wherever you post.

This really makes me sad that so much crap is going on. I have been reading on ff for over 8 years and I just am speechless that all this shit is happening. So many excellent writers are discussed with it and I don't blame any of you.

Please keep writing. I will join you blog for updates. 3

Think you could put your blog web address in your profile as ff doesn't allow them in stories?
Love reading your stories and re-reading the completed ones!

Come find you at where? It edited out the site.

Thank you for writing a lovely story line as I really enjoyed it. I'm glad Edward and Bella had the perfect life for them and their children.

Sometimes the spelling errors threw me, and I had to stop and figure out what you meant or I LOL because it made it so funny, but it was still a great story. :)

Edward royally screwed up and HE needs to be the one to apologize. He should have had the balls to tell Darcy he was there with Bella and that he was going to sit with her at dinner, not next to Darcy. He practically ignored Bella through dinner, back in the hotel room, and on the flight home. HE needs to stop his crap. If I could I would reach through this monitor and smack him upside the head, then read him the riot act I would do so in a heartbeat.