| Reviews for The Immortals (UNDER REVISION) |
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   Wynterlace chapter 24 . 3/25 Cute story, continue writing |
| Allie4Life chapter 1 . 2/27/2019 please update it has been 'under revision' for 3 years! |
| Jayball12 chapter 11 . 7/12/2018 in the begining of this chapter which girl was complaining about the movie lucy couldn't be the one arguing and just coming down the stairs with Natsu did you mean Levy by any chance or aomeone else so confused but the story is great so far I love it very much |
| Jazlyn odom chapter 24 . 2/5/2018 The whole book is so good please update I want Lucy to end of pregnant soon |
| Nlmistical chapter 24 . 12/30/2017 This is a pretty talented story and is really interesting for fantasy lovers. Also romance lovers. This story also has quite a lot of humor so i say to read it cause i know i definitely misjudged it at first. |
| Forgottenwulfe chapter 1 . 11/11/2017 this is amazing, I hope there is more some time soon |
| Guest chapter 24 . 7/11/2017 Hey dud are you going to continue this chapter or what common man better continue or well I am gonna ... Think it for yourself |
| Guest chapter 24 . 4/23/2017 I've reread this story like 6 times and I'm still waiting for your update...come back love |
| FairyLover01 chapter 24 . 2/18/2017 CONTINUE PLEASE! |
| Npcmarina chapter 24 . 10/24/2016 Please update soon I really love this story |
| akitowolfblood chapter 1 . 10/21/2016 IF YOU ARE DOING ANOTHER WAIT FOR A TEAR THING AGAIN THEN DON BOTHER UPDATING AT ALL DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG WE WAITED FOR YOU TO UPDATE I PRACTICALLY CRIED WHEN IT TOOK YOU A YEAR TO UPDATE I KNOW YOU HAVE YOUR REASONS BUT I JUST SO MAD AT YOU I FEEL LIKE SCREAMING IN YOUR DAN FACE sigh but I'll get over it I can be too over passionate sometimes and thus review has been written with a lot of passion well bye |
| akitowolfblood chapter 24 . 10/20/2016 Oh OH NOW YOU DECIDE TO UPDATE AFTER BEGGING AND BEGGING NOW YOU DECIDE YOU GOT SOME NERVE I WAITED AGES AGES FOR YOU TO UPDATE WE ALL DID AND NOW YOU UPDATE I GONNA LOSE IT I JUST I CAN AAAAAARRRRRRGGGGGHHHHHHHH |
| Queen of Agartha chapter 24 . 10/12/2016 OH My Mother Fuck'n Talula I love this story. The ending is soooo BADASS, and no homo but there is nothing hotter than a badass chick3! I only wish it was longer. |
| tre.lb.wvu chapter 24 . 9/28/2016 I just read this story in one day. I've been completely enthralled with is. you're a great story teller and you have me hooked. You have a new fan in me. Please come out with a new chapter soon! |
| Guest chapter 24 . 9/12/2016 This makes me sooo giddy! Plz update soon |
