Great job at a shitty story. Don't know if it was intentional or not but it really is shitty. One things for sure I'm not coming to you for any stories. You just threw yourself into the lot of many more shitty writers who are incapable of making a story to be put onto library shelves.

dude how could you stop this was just the first 4 pages now I'm bummed

Great story. Hope you or someone continues it someday.

This seems good on the developments here

Things are getting interesting

Things are going to get more interesting soon enough

Well this could be interesting to read here

adoption aka death by fanfiction. Have fun getting someone to continue it.

This is a wonderful story

Man if i was naruto i would hate ty lee and would probably tell her that

Ugh, fucking pricks, all of them. Ty Lee especially is the biggest bitch.

Fantastic first chapter, though I was hoping Naruto to be overly powerful and terrifying...

Ok, I finally got time to read this after a long and very busy period of my life.

Interactions seem fine, but I have to put into question Naruto's character. On the previous chapter he wanted to be alone, was afraid of many and was bullied by that guy trying to get in Ty Lee's panties. Here... Naruto smiles to Zuko and helps him up.

I'm a bit confused with the whole character development here, but I hope future chapters clear that out.

Well, a pretty solid intro with some of the canon Naruto plot points taken up to eleven. I won't deny that having Naruto kicked when he's down feels cheap, but when someone knows what they're doing it truly shows.

The fuck is this why did Naruto get captured so easily