Reviews for New Kid
Guiltisgone chapter 1 . 9/9/2018
Hi there, I really like your story and after years of reading it again and again I plan to translate it into Vietnamese. No commercial purposes intended! I just wanna share amazing stories like yours with my friends and add up my personal collections. So, may I have your permission to have my translation published on my Wattpad account (with proper credit to you, of course)?
bubble.duckie chapter 1 . 10/7/2017
I so freaking love it! He is just so clueless!
sachiko chapter 1 . 12/22/2016
Jajajaja alto, rubio y guapo sip en definitiva esa es Fate. Me gustó la parte del beso :)
Gracias
Zdisslava chapter 1 . 9/28/2016
"Who do you know that's straight?"

Nanoha: "Just the boys."

Heh. Awesome.
OrionGold chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
Like him already.
Kura chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
Haha this was pretty funny !
Thanks, It's a nicr fic -
Ritsu T chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
I love this one (:
shamanic demonator chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
HAHA nice!
Redmoon021 chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
Lol that was cute and funny
RR chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
"Who do you know that's straight?"
Lol, really cool ending line. XD Nice oneshot, very funny and entertaining.
megamar chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
awesome
antlan87 chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
That was an amusing and enjoyable one-shot, and it is hard to go wrong with NanoFate!
APLuxO.O chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
LOLOL. It seriously took every ounce of my will to not suddenly burst out laughing in front of my mom and sister. Ah...well, I'm glad that Kaname (also nice name) wasn't against Nanoha x Fate and start causing a commotion.

Well, that was a good laugh. I'll be looking forward to your other stories.
superglue805 chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
Poor guy but it wasn't his fault that he didn't know Nanoha belonged to Fate and vice versa. I found it funny how Nanoha's rejection made him question his sex appeal and kind Fate just had to reassure him. I really thought Nanoha would slap a Starlight Breaker on his face while he was hitting on Fate.

I really enjoyed reading this. Looking forward to your next work!
Silica chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
LOL5555 Even though it is one-shot, this fiction is totally hilarious and can make me smile! Please continue writing :)