An excellent story. I loved the whole AU badass, lonely John. It took them a while to figure out what was wrong with John, but they got there in the end.

Your an excellent one of my few favorites, but I wish you still write Sheppard stories. You involve all your characters and they are never stiff, it's a pleasure to read your stories.

So well done! Loved every second of it! Thank you. Great story with characters you really care about.

Great plot, loved the AU idea. Thank you for the entertainment!

Awesome story! I loved the addition of Jane into it, and I think I'm starting to like John's brother more as well :)

I read this a few months back and added it to my favorites. I was just re-reading it today and realized I never left a review. This is a great story. Full of suspense. I was wondering and guessing what was going on from the plane ride and the family welcome home party. I like the tie-in to The Deadulas Variations. I love that Dave Sheppard is in it. I like the romance and the presumptuous nurse. Thanks for writing such great SGA stories! Kudos!

Interesting story...loved the twist...figured something was up, too many things beyond a concussion and possible problems with medication...glad I got to read it in its entirety...great denouement, leaves the door open for more misadventure with John and Jane...and not murder victims, John and Jane Doe...more like the characters in a reader. like see spot run...

Another excellent story really exciting funny heartwarming lots of good feels and adventure.

Wow! What a great story. I loved every bit of it, the characters, action, even the romance (and I usually stay away from it), but this was perfect. I loved the whump as usual, you can never have to muchI even liked the AU concept, it was very intriguing and clever. Let's just say this was an amazing story, thank you for sharing!

Oh wow, I have just zoomed through this fic in like a day and it was amazing! This was such a well-written, well-plotted, well-characterised story. It felt like an actual episode (but longer - yay!). It had a proper, well-thought out, really interesting plot and the way you developed and revealed the plot had me absolutely hooked and skipping straight on to the next chapter to find out what happened next! Your concept of the AU universe overlapping this one was a fantastic idea and you executed it so well! And the whump... oh, of course the whump was just delicious! :) All in all this was a brilliant, well-conceived and *really* well-written fic and I enjoyed it SO much. Thank you so much for writing it and for sharing it. :)

Wow that was rude of Sam.

This was a fantastic read! I couldn't stop once I got started. Thank you!

LOVED IT!

Wow I literally stayed up all night to read this and it's 6:17 AM now and I need to get up in an hour and I haven't slept at all, but. No regrets.

I usually hate OCs, but this one was done very well and realistically. Keep up the good work!

Loved the story, very well written and nicely tied up.