It feels sad for some reason. I feel sad for Bulma and Trunks. it's sad their relationship just ended out of frustration and distance. still a well written story.

Wow, I think you really kept them in character for this one. Good job!

I enjoyed this story it was a bit short for me and in chapter 3 Bulma came off kinda desperate but the story is well written and I ! The ending was bitter for me but that is how Vegeta is! sometimes I just want to punch him! Haha anyways I liked it overall :))

It was funny how she told him. I'm a little confused though, what was the sound made at the end?

The Bulma Vegeta thing is easy to explain. Bulma wanted to have kinky sex with a genocidal, sociopathic dwarf and Vegeta was horny and unlike Goku, the killer dwarf was an actual guy ready to fuck anything with tits and he of course could fuck not just Bulma, but Yamcha and Goku as well by doing the deed.

Yeah, Vegeta didn't go "good" until the Buu saga.

decent chapter but bulma seems too weak and desperate

Very nice work keeping things "T" rated but getting the point across. Vegeta comes off as why not? I don't have anything else to do. So very Vegeta!

You've portrayed Vegeta perfectly in this chapter! 'Ten seconds'! LOL! I canso picture him doing that!

Nice start. You see to have everyone in character far as I can tell.

I really like it! Although I had to kind of wonder how you didn't get that Krillin is Kuririn, and Freiza, Freeza. Even I read the Manga before the show and knew instantly when I went on the 'internet'. They're just romanized.

Anyways! Im glad you'll continue and that you already know the estimated length! One tiny thing, maybe not make AN's at the end a quarter the size of the story? Really got my hopes up looking at the scroll bar on the side thinking I was half way, but then bold font peeks in. ;(

In the authors note you put Frieza is Freeza
its never been Frieza that would be fry za but I like this story

Very fun to read! Its a bit on the short side but your writing is so good that word count hardly means much to me at this point! I am so pumped that I found a B/V fanfic that's light and humorous! I think you portrayed Bulma and Vegeta exceptionally well! Your writing flows super nicely and your dialouge reads well! You've got me stoked! Congrats for having so much awesome sauce!

Okay, nice start. Might want to fix a few things, though: Vegeta stood, not standed; and that sentence near the end: "Bulam though to herself, as she got to her room.

Nice first chapter, I already can't wait for more interaction between Vegeta and Bulma. You definitely have a good handle on Bulma's 'voice'. I can absolutely imagine her thinking to herself and speaking just like that. " It doesn't take a genius to figure it out, even though I am one," that, especially, sounds like her. I did notice one typo, though, when Bulma first sees Vegeta. Should be: "Though he stood* casually..."
Minor.
Looking forward to an update :)

what is the plot of the story,other than the obvious one?