I'm flying through a tonne of Sabriel fics right now, craving short fixes and being terrible at leaving comments but I just had to stop right here and seriously freaking praise the way that you wrote Balthazar, aka SPOT. ON.

He made me laugh out loud and I could truly hear and see Sebastian delivering those lines so thank you so damn much for that because people so often get him wrong and they just don't capture that dismissive bite he has and this was so perfect, even though you only hd him for like a paragraph.

Seriously, awesome work right there!

I have become a fan fo your witting/fanfic and can not wait to see what you come up with next (my fav paring is Sam/Gabriel)

Do you take request? If so I'd love to request something.

oh when reading this work I noticed one little mistake just one (we all make them, so dont kick yourself about it)

Concern flickered in Sam's expression as he realized what he had to address next. "I had no idea, you know," he said quietly. "That saying yes to Lucifer would break the bond? I would never in a million years do that on purpose. I love you, Gabe, more than I have any right to. Everything you said about us, please know that I believe that too. Just because I might get it in my head to do something stupid every no and again doesn't mean I don't love you with every ounce of my being."

When you get to "something stupid every no and again" should it be "something stupid every now and again"? (unless thats what you meant, then its cool)

NAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

Aww, that was so sweet...you write amazingly well!

Its official I'm going to end up reading all your work because this is my second one and I'm in love with your writting all over again Can't wait to read your others

this was so cute and worth the read :3 i loved it! good work!

I THINK I JUST SOBBED OUT 5 GALLONS OF WATER
SAMMY HAS SUCH LOW SELF ESTEEM AND IT JUST...
It broke my heart...
I feel so broken...

OMG, I love this story so much!
Just beautiful how you describe Sam and Gabriel's bond.
Thank you for writing this!

Really cute! Loved this story!

very good, very sweet

MORE please. ! LOVE IT!

Evidently Sammy has never met me. I've eaten that much cotton candy and more and then went on roller coasters. I like your story, I love the way you portray Gabe, but I feel like Lucifer torturing Gabriel was a bit out of character for him, as he obviously still loved Gabriel. Anywho, thanks for being a fellow fan of letting Gabe live!