Hello there mate, new follower here. I'm just commenting to tell you that you have done a wonderful job at making this prologue. I intend to binge read this story and I have high expectations for it. Thanks for the chapter, and keep up the good work!

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Please tell me you intend to finish this

As I have said numerous times before in my profile, I am a devoted fan to the first two over Bioshock infinite. But, I must admit that I have had a blast playing this game and running around in a brand new world. Also, I've said it before, and I'll say it again, it's just not the same. I love it, but its a different game.

That aside, now for your story. So far, I like it quite a lot. You've twisted some things in which I'm pretty sure that we all would've preferred to have happened. And even though its a minor detail, I'm also happy that you kept it in the original universe/tear/etc. This is because, I felt as though that as soon as I left the first one, it seemed as though i was living in a false world, or something like that.

this is a really great story and im intrigued to see where it goes :)

*scratches head* The ending confused me. Find someone? Who?
Well anyway, the story was awesome all the way through. I'm so glad she decided to stay with Booker instead of go off and sacrifice herself to someone else's cause. Excellent writing - very descriptive, detailed, with nice, long chapters. Fist bump to you.

I also prefer the original concept of the game.

Guess I will have to wait for chapter 28. Best chapter yet.

Just found this the other day. It's great to see a solid AU built off of the preview clips and demos. I admit I was a little uncertain with some of the retread of events at the beginning but the story only gets better as you take it down a new path. I eagerly await the continuation of this work.

I adore the way this is going.

If the Siphon was what was keeping Elizabeth's power from overloading and harming her, the fact is she could well have been installed in that tower for her own safety.

I know you have the plot well in hand, of course, but a bit of speculation on my part is unavoidable, and I thought you might wonder what I was coming up with.

If Elizabeth, prior to her alteration, was a natural born daughter of another Comstock or a genetic experiment (as they certainly retro -engineered so many other technologies), this puts her in much the same situation as Jack in Rapture.

Comstock's eyes being blue and Booker's being green, it's easy for them to be two different men, not two sides of the same man as per canon.

Finally, if Songbird if truly released from Comstock's control, would it fully ally with Elizabeth? Again, if the Tower was her safe haven, it may well have been acting in her best interests as best possible.

We are nearly at the end of this brilliant piece of fanfiction cant believe that it will be over sooner or later it has been one hell of an ride that is for sure.

This is very good, can't wait till you post again.

The story has really advanced quiet excited for the next chapter keep it up.