Reviews for Business |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Uwah! X3 this was just... •\\\\\• ... . beautiful. *has a nosebleed in the corner* |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Kind of" doesn't over it! But at the same time it was seriously hot so great job. |
![]() ![]() So sexy! The elaboration on Mikado giving himself anal was so lewd and detailed oh mygosh. I think the most sexual/private part about yaoi has to do with anal and you hit the mark with your descriptive story. Amazing job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so vivid and elaborate! Totally adored this story, I really like how you capture the personalities so well, and especially how perfect the dialogue is. I love how cute Mikado is, and devilish Izaya is. The story was so sexual in a devious way that fit Izaya perfectly. It was great how you included so much progression in the dirty scenes with Mikado preparing himself(AHH its always awkward commenting about sex). Thanks for making this little piece of artwork! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy mother of yaoi I need more ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() He's not being nice Mikado, please don't be naiive, lol. Don't thank him...cause you probably won't feel the same after he makes you do what he wants you to do for your "payment", rofl. Voyeurism...isn't it hilarious...only in certain instances and those instances are mostly in fanfics. _ Wooow, that was hilarious and the scene was hella sexy. This was great! Though Izaya was so wrong for how he did that boy at the end...rofl, that was cold. _ Thanks for sharing this! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you! And remember, don't apologize for something you enjoyed! |
![]() ![]() ![]() is it sad that ive imagined this all happening before Nd u writing it is making very happy |
![]() ![]() It was simply perfect! You wrote their reactions and expressions perfectly and wonderfully! ! !:D You are a very talented writer! Keep up the amazing work! C: I want to see what Kida would do if he'd seen the video...;3 or something...! I wanted to say more but I forgot what...3 xDDDDDDDD. Thank you!: 33333333 :) |
![]() ![]() I think I need a blood supplies LOTS OF THEM. 'cause you always write a wonderful smut and yaoi fic for my cute and handsome pair. Okay... excuse myself as my nose keep bleeding.. FUJOSHI AND YAOI FOREVER |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it, especially the ending :D new screensaver... Priceless :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was. . . utterly amazing! I especially liked the ending, and this was the best smut I ever read |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't think your sentences were awkward. You did a good job |
![]() ![]() lov it sequel? |