I have to say that I'm totally amazed that this hasn't been pulled from Fan Fiction. I've certainly read stories that have been pulled for less. If I were going for an atypical tale, u certainly succeeded.

I don't even know what to say

I'm determined to finish this despite how sick it gets.

These two r really sick.

These two r really weird.

Had to have faith cause I had no idea where you were taking this! But that is the sign of a good story! Thanks for writing! Mwah!

really enjoyed it. Very different than the usual fics I read!

This is indeed intriguing.

Oh wow, that was perfect! I really loved it! I cannot believe it is over! I was constantly on my toes for this one, and loved every bit!

Great story! Not at all what I'd normally read but I loved it!

Wow I like how you ended this, I didn't expect them to have kids, just by Edwards comment in one chapter.

I can't wait for your next story, you never disappoint.

Great epilgue, Thank you for sharing this story with us

Wow! Just wow! Reading this was certainly an experience. Thanks for sharing it with all of us!

I really enjoyed this last chapter. I'm sad to see it end though.
I love how poetic it was. This last chapter is really what the whole story was about. If people had the ability to give it a chance then they understand this completely.
A little tongue in cheek and cute as well.
Thanks for having the lady balls to go 'there' with this one. I commend you and can't wait for the next one.
Thanks for sharing.

That was one of the best epilogues. It completely fit the story and was completely true. Look at the 3 women missing in Ohio for years and they were right there in a house in a neighborhood surrounded by people. Thanks for sharing this disturbing yet completely plausible story.