Sorry about Kevin, Gwen. He'll come around soon.

I think Gwen has conquered her fear of sharks at long last. As to the shark she just kissed, I think it was a nurse shark. They aren't really aggressive towards humans, last I checked.

Wow! What a flashback! That was both scary and cool at the same time! Almost like Rodney Fox's experience with a great white in the 1960's!

Good to know that Ben's always there to help Gwen. That's what cousins are for.

Not exactly what I had in mind. Again I was hoping for more romance and for them to confess their feelings for each other. Nevertheless it was a good story and I enjoyed reading it. Though forgive me for my bluntness, I think this story didn't use it's potential and it's kind of a shame. Still, it was a great story and I'm looking foward to the next one.
Good job

I was hoping for more romance. I hope Ben at least tells her how he feels and that Gwen will feel the same way. Maybe also a kiss or something. Nevertheless, good job and it's good to see Gwen is alright

Ouch... I think Gwen's lucky to get outta there alive.

Shark cards. Really nice... XD

Aw... That's just sweet. Even though it wasn't what I had in mind, it's nice to see both kids kiss.

Perhaps swimming will have to wait. For now, games are just as good.

I was turning blue during half the chapter but I'm breathing again now that she's alive. I hope she makes it

Part of me wished Ben would just kill Animo already. The other part of me didn't.

Poor Ben...

Yes! Gwen's alive! Barely...

Good fanfic

Perfect timing, Gwen.

That Animo's a madman!

No! Not Gwen!

This is bad. I hope Gwen makes it. I had a suspicion she would save him from the shark but I didn't see this coming. Just when I read the name of the chapter I had feeling about it. Anyway keep up the good work. I'm looking foward to the next chapter

Noooooooo this is sooo mean

This is it; the moment of truth.

27 cases of shark attacks?! Wow!

I just love the Southern news reporters. LOL

Dr. Aloysius James Animo... I should've known. Who'd have thought that he was turning suckers into sharks. My kind of mad scientist!

I enjoyed the story but not the cliffhanger. Hope you update soon

Well this was sad but realistic. Ben's an emotional mess and I think you portray that very well. Hope him and Gwen reconcile this little spat and all is forgiven. Great chap. Keep rockin

Poor Gwen... How could Ben do this to her own cousin?

Ouch. That was heart breaking. I hope they make up in the end and that the romance will appear later on