It's spelled Kirishima

finish it!
good story, but i want to know how it ends

write more chapers and finish the story!
pretty good so far

heheeh funni fic!

I LOVED THIS FIC! could ya hurry up with chapter 3? anyway I just wanted to say that.

-Jaiden

This is an interesting fic, quite funny actually. Oh yea, they do have Starbucks in Japan, and it is actually doing quite well. The busiest Starbucks is actually located in Japan.

hehe, so funny! Can't wait till next chapter _

Okay, psychological therapy prescription for Rei Ayanami... "assassinate all existing members of Linkin Park"... ah, nifty stuff.

when cani get my next hit?

pleez continue! onegai-shimasu!

that was good, even if Rei is too OOC and the Shinji-on-drugs part not very useful... But the end is very funny... You should write more...

FUNNY

Whoops...looks like most of the " ... " got turned into 'll go fix that when we upload the next chapter or whenever we get around to it

I think this was pretty funny. Just clean up the grammar and it would be even better

I personally dislike this fic. Well, first of all, the technical errors were all over the place. .You have . the oddest. places.

Secondly, the characters are completely OOC. Yes, a humorfic with everyone in-character is possible.

-Shinji was OOC. Yes, I know he was high but that's just an excuse. (just like wiping his memory... looks at other fics)

-Asuka was (again) portrayed quite negatively. In a humor fic, I would accept it... but ONLY if Rei had been portrayed negatively. See, I'm quite sensitive to how people portray Asuka.

-Rei... good god don't get me started.

Yea, OOC aside it's funny sometimes. Well sorry, actually the only time that was funny was when Shinji exclaimed, "I CAN FLY!"

It's above average/good but not very good.

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