Very interesting! Some of this really has some great dialogue and the format is unique! It is a quick read and I really enjoyed some of the characterization, especially with Leo!

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Lol, hilarious!

Awww, so much fluff! No Mikey, don't ever change! You're one of a kind! XD

Haha, cute chapter. Mikey gets so intense with his games! XD Just wanted to point out that there are a few grammatical errors in this chapter. Like for example, the absence of periods. Example: "Mikey's a bit lighter than I thought he'd be He carried Mikey the his bedroom door" There should definitely be a period after "be". Just try to be careful with that to avoid run on sentences. Other than that, great chapter. I can't wait for more! :)

LOLOLOLOL that seems about right. That's just a typical day for the turtles. Hehe, funny stuff!

This is a cool story. How about that talk Donnie was gonna have with Mikey about the mutant cat...

That's cute... a lesson was learned in my own story about loosing teeth. Only it was Donnie who lost it.

Love the one with leather head is there gonna be more on that xxxx

Update soon! Can you write a chapter on that? The reason Micky never tickled him again?

Awww that's sweet! And great idea! Keep up the good work :)

HAHAHAHA That was awesome, I loved it, hehehehe, great job!

Aww that was so sweet and heart warming! Please keep up!

Mushy is good...much better than that one chappie where Leo was having that nightmare...I WAS CRYING AS I READ THAT ONE! Hmm...that's the sort of thing to be in a review for that chapter. Ah well. NOW UPDATE, PERSON!

That was cute.
-hannah1