I absolutely love this. I'm waiting for sabo to appear any time soon here and to react to this. He has two brothers, one died and the second one is with one foot in the grave. I need him knowing luffy is going to die before he passes away

I know it's been ages since once worked on this but well done! I really enjoyed reading and Youve done a good job even though You don't like what You've written. I'm proud of it. v

i want mooreeeeeeee

What a let down

I kinda really want to know what happened during all those trial runs, jeez. Poor Luffy XD It'd be nice to read a short chapter detailing mini-events concerning those trials lololol

:'(

Nice chapter, imstill kinda wanna see more of how zoro's feeling ant this whole situation tho/ wat sanji's thnkn cuz he personally knows Iva and they never mentioned it once to sanji. Plzzzzz update this its been uears and this is soo good!

I'm a bit confused abt chopper's trial runs and wat exactly he's doing tht is makn em so ticked off, bt other than tht, im so excited plz update soon!

Aww this crew!

Oh shits gonna go down! Im excited, bt lol i had to look up wat lotus style position is and man i didnt know it was called tht! I always called it criss-crossed-applesauce lol

Aw, oh Brook...

Oh shit, i hope he's gonna tell em abt iva and what he did

Well damn touché on tht last one

Is Luffy going to end up being a girl or something?

I love stories where Luffy is hurting and the others worry (sorry Luffy) and I really enjoy you story. Should you update again I'll be here:D