im sorry but this story could be the best story in the world but even if it was 33 bleedin chapters for 12,450 words is absolutly ridiculas thats about 1 decent chapters worth(as you can tell i like long stories):) that aside your still a better writer than me so id like to thank for taking the time to share your imagination with us

a excellent story but the chapters are way too short you need to combine a bunch of these chapters into one chapter if it takes a person less than an hour to read the chapters are just too short other than that you've got some spelling issues that you need to correct use the fanfiction app in the text-to-speech function to listen to your story to correct any spelling errors other than that I absolutely loved your story well done.

Nice Story, too bad you didnt finish it.

Another great story of yours.

Go Emma!

You must be one stupid moronic writer, a recent previous chapter you had the goblins remove the scar and yet here in chapter 18 and 19 you have harry scar still on him...

It's a bit of a weird last chapter, but PLEASE UPDATE

Out of the blue, the Weasleys were at his birthday party, now it's like Ron doesn't know them?

Ti Quan Do is actually spelled Taekwondo. My parents teach the global standards along with many Korean weaponry.

Nice story. Something tells me that is gonna have his world rocked that night!

Wait a minute! They have Rent-a-Wrecks in England? They probably didn't have a lot of Pintos in Surrey if they did.

Overall, this story was very interesting. I loved the plot and the overall storyline, but I think that quite a lot of improvement is needed. The ending was also rushed and does not give a lot of closure for the readers.

good story thank you :)

harry already knew about the horcruxes from the diary.

didn't sirius already take the trace off Harry and Hermione's wands, and wouldn't he have done if for draco as well? still reading