I don't know what you were talking about in your author's note. Bad characterization and all that jazz. That was freaking amazing! You do a really good job of cutting right down to the quick of the emotion of a scene and made each moment feel like it was the single most important thing in the world. I absolutely loved it, and though I married Lon'qu in the game, watching the way you made this pairing unfold was wonderful. Every moment felt magical, and I absolutely loved it. So thank you for this. :)
Keep on writing in perfect confidence!

I loved this! Lon'qu and Olivia are PERFECT together! I really loved how you used body language to convey how they were feeling. Great work!

This is so cute and sweet story! I really love how you portrait them, good work!

Wow, beautiful story. I could totally see this pairing and the way you portrayed them was really cute. Your writing is superb, the whole story flowing really smooth and nice. The lines were cute and the descriptions vivid. Great job!

I thank thee for writing this masterpiece.

God, Lon'qu and Olivia. Once in a while, I would search up fanfics of them, but there really aren't that many. But how the hell did I not find this?

I've shipped them hard, but because of you, I'm shipping them even harder.

This was so sweet! I hadn't thought that much about pairing Olivia and Lon'qu, but now I want to in my next play through. I think the characterization is spot on. You did an excellent job!

ohmygod,my heart is broken and i'm crying
it's so beautiful and u wrote them so well and I can't handle the feels right now,but i'm so glad u got this request,because I love them and the writing so much

I thought it was a fantastic story. Lon'qu and Olivia are two of my favorite characters respectively, and I really, REALLY like their pairing. Honestly, I found everything you wrote to be completely within the realm of possibility. Great work!

Lon'qu/Olivia is awesome and there aren't enough fan fictions about it and this one is probably the best one I've read. It's full of fluff and it's so cute and you wrote this beautifully. And I am very happy that there is some Frederick/Sumia and Donnel/Lissa in there because I ship them also and overall this fanfic was perfect :D

I. Absolutely. LOVED. This.

Their love was so beautiful,
the way they yearned for eachother,
their shyness being at it's strongest with one another,yet them gaining the courage to overcome it for eachother.

You displayed their personalities very well imo,

I loved how she wanted him to see her performance the most,

how they both felt, as he watched and she danced.
The ways they displayed their love in this,
the silent words they spoke to eachother,

it truly made my heart warm with their beautiful true love.

I recall an amazing fic I commented on on deviantart called "Love On The War Front",
if you're the same skywolf then it's no surprise that I enjoyed this.

Lon'qu x Olivia is a top favorite of mine,

this was my first fic of them and I am very glad it was.
I pray I find fics of these two that are as half as good as this.

Thank you for the romantic pleasure of this.

Please or please make another one with them in it. I'd like to see how their relationship grew over time. I would love to see lon'qu get aroused by olivia and olivia get the hots for lon'qu later in their relationship. I dunno it just be really cute how they react and stuff. Like him sweating and OMG please wrote something like this. Your writing was great by the way and beautiful description and dialogue. I would like to see more dialogue and more of lon'qu and olivia letting their guards down. Lust yes lust I want lust. Oh dear now I'm rambling on. Darn you and your great writing!

Even till this day, this fanfic still breaches beyond what is beautiful. It's truly heart warming and is beyond satisfactory. I would truly appreciate it if you made another fanfic just as warm and inviting as this one, with Lon'qu and Olivia as the main couple yet again. I would change nothing about this fic because it's as if perfection and I believe it came out this way only because you were happy and satisfied with your writing. The characterization was on point and true to the characters. I can understand how hard it can be to do characters with harder personalities given by the owners or creators. If you do decide to do another fic with them in it, I would love to see their relationship get a little edgier romantically and intimately. But until then, I will be patiently and regularly waiting and viewing any potential piece that you share with us. I literally cannot wait until your next fic comes out that features them in it. Your writing inspires mine.

Awwww... This is really cute. Very appropriate for these two given their respective insecurities and problems, but it's really nice to see how they connect. Honestly, this feels more true to them as a pair than what the game gave us.

Well structured, good wording and choices for the setting, pacing, and so on. Everything at the beginning really felt accurate and all the characters felt like they fit there, so kudos for that. Also, Lon'qu was a very nice blend of calm confidence and blunt straightforwardness and I thought you pulled it off really well. I refer to him knowing Olivia's routine well enough to get ahead of her and get her what she wants, but he's also direct enough to just give her his cloaks when she mentions being cold. Lots of nice touches that made the story feel real.

Great job, and thanks for sharing.

Like a moron, I never actually reviewed this. This is my ABSOLUTE favorite of all your stories. Your characters and diction are fabulous, and the setup and plot is amazingly executed. And whatever you did, you made it so beautiful and mesmerizing. I keep going back to read it over and over again! So beautiful! I would absolutely love to see you do another Lon'quxOlivia, you do it so immensely wonderfully! I love this so stinking much!

I also adore Gaius and Cordelia, they're so immensely adorable. I LOVE so many of your stories. When I get a chance to grab internet, I'll review the other ones I adore, until then you'll have to make do with this. :)

Blessings!
4thFromtheFurnace

Beautify just so fricken beautiful