This really was a grest Fanfiction...

You capitalized future and I don't know if it was on purpose, you spelled 'straight' 'strait', you spelled 'guessed'-'guess' past tense-as 'guest,' which is how you spell 'guest' as in, 'be my guest'

i think that grander is spelled grandeur

You spelled 'presence' 'presents.' I know I am giving you a lot of spelling corrections, but you might need this for a test at school or something.

You spelled 'memorize' 'memories.'

You've been spelled 'else' 'alts', although I suspect that was on purpose, and 'least' 'lest.' You also spelled 'apologize' 'apologies.'

You spelled 'clothes' 'cloths' and, while that is a word, it's not used in that context. Great story! Happy (now late) birthday.

You made a few grammar errors. For example, 'to' is used if you are using it in context of saying you are going somewhere ('she went to the store,' 'he's going to California,' 'I left to go home.' 'Too' is used for counting-not 2 is spelled two, but in amount- 'too much,' 'I'm leaving, too,' 'there were too many.' If too is at the end of a sentence, there is a comma. There might be exceptions. The story is great!

And this is why people should pay attention to history lessons lol the twist .

Lol so both jace and will get chewed nice

Lol church.

Yes malec.

Does Isabelle even pay any attention to her history lessons.

Luckily Alec wasn't doing anything even more intimate

I wonder if any will accidentally walk in on them making out .