Love this story so far probably one of the best FE fanfics I’ve read on here 10/10

Damnit libra... why’d you break it to her in that manner

“Good for him!” Hahahaha!

Always loved that support

I hope I see who else you ship people with

Kewl story. Very believable development and satisfying beginning, middle, and end. Probably one of the best olivia-focused fics on the site. Very well done story overall. Only real issue is Maribelle sort of fading out as the story progressed, but that may have been done with the intent of focusing more on Robin and Olivia, which it does great.

I'm puking cotton right now;this is so fluffy

such a sweet story. loved it to bits :)

Shit dude. That was a good and fun read. I'm a sucker for the light-hearted stuff, and this story plastered a goofy ass grin on my face pretty much the whole way. It was also all absolutely adorable. And guess what, I'm a sucker for adorable, too. Great stuff, gave me something to light read for a few days, and the smiles have definitely been a big help, what with finals and all. So thank you for the great story, and I'll be looking forward to any future works from you.

Well kinda wen MIA there for awhile but pretty much binge read the rest of this the past couple of days. Overall a very cute and good-feels type of story. I am normally a Robin x Cordelia but Robin x Olivia is a very close second. But I digress, Aside from the grammar errors which were a little more than I usually prefer were dwarfed by the yeah, sorry if that was a little harsh but I usually give up on a story if the grammar is off. But the issues are far between. Aside from that though I really have no complaints. This was a sweet story and I very much enjoyed it! I do hope to see more like this from you and will definitely enjoy your other stories in due time. Until then, best of luck with your book, hope life is good and keep up the great work! Take it easy until next time!

Cute chapter, my only real criticism is spelling and grammar errors throughout the chapter. Nothing too bad but enough to kind of break the flow while reading. Aside from that it was a very enjoyable read. Keep up the great work!

The plot thickns! I love the Nowi x Donnel subplot!

Aside from a few grammar/spelling errors, this was a really good first chapter. I'm glad that this is a "feel-good" story, because the last few I read were very sad T_T. But anyway, I like how all of that ended up with one of Olivia's catchphrases. Can't wait to read more! Keep up the great work!

I would be lying if I said that these last few chapters didn't have me feeling the feels. I would also be lying if I said I didn't tear up at the end of said chapters... Every... Time... Really good story, delivered that happy-feel-good vibe you wanted to deliver. Loved the fourth wall breaks, enjoyed Gaius and Robin's banter (always a sign of a good FE fanfic I believe) and just all in all liked this story. Although, one thing that did strike me in your chapters (have to put some sort of critique in here) is that you may want to do a few look overs once you finish writing a chapter. There are some grammatical mistakes, nothing too big of course, but they're that. Just thought I'd give you a little constructive criticism :D. I wish you luck with your own book, and hope to some day read that as well. The little bit of hipster in me wants to be able to say, "Hey, I read that author's stuff before they became famous!" XD

Peace,

nickdaman6

So it's finally over. I enjoyed the story it was amazing. Good luck with that book you're writing. Knowing that you're writing it, I'm sure it will be a success.