I really like this chapter, how your writing is your own and not the scrip of the show. You are much more descriptive when things are fleshed out. There are many times when you follow the script too closely...as in, people say things suddenly or things just happen with no pretense or reason. We can't understand if we haven't seen the show (which I have, but for someone who hasn't, things could be very confusing). I do hope you have time some day to go back to each chapter of everything and flesh it out for readers. Still loving it immensely, just my observation thus far.

I am so confused. I have read every story up until this point and still don't know when this kiss to the neck/hickey happened. Where is it in the other stories?

I thought that this was Mycroft's finest moment, in the actual series...

A bank in the Strand, not a bank on the Strand. (*It's only on the strand if it's a beach...)

(I correct you only because I love your stories. Otherwise I couldn't be arsed...)

Shouldn't Sarah be something a bit grander at St. Bart's than a nurse?

"This happened several times over the next few weeks until one day Jareth noticed that Sarah not-so-covertly stuck one of Jareth's shirts into his laundry bin.
That night, Jareth stuck his head into Sarah's room and found her wrapped up in one of his shirts as she slept. Jareth never brought it up."

"Jareth had not caught on that Sarah stole his shirts to sleep at night."

So, either he knows or he doesn't know...which is it?

You do tend (not in this installment) to spell "striped" (as in Sarah's striped cap) as "stripped"...

Ah, first I want to say that I am still greatly enjoying these stories. I still have a few more to go. There are two minor, well not to me are they minor things I did not like. Yet this is not enough to change my mind about how great of a writer you are. These are just my personal opinions. One, I cannot say I am at all for Jareth being any part human. Goblin, okay I can accept that. I am glad he is not Fae in this as well. I guess I am just not a big fan of humans. Two, why, oh why in the name of the Underground would you cut the boys hair? I realize that his hair style is out of date, and I am sure if makes him stand out in a crowd. But dude, I love his hair just the way it is. I mean, I am gonna assume that overall Jareth has a more human appearance to him as it is. Why take away his hair? Or does he still have the weird eyebrow thing and make-up going on through out this? I mean it's not like the people don't know about him. Can't say at 15 I was sexually attracted to Jareth, but I loved how he looked overall back then. It was his crystals and his hair and make-up, eyebrow things I loved the most about him. Oh and is sorta evil personality. Being Bowie was a plus as well. I had liked him well enough before he was the Goblin King. Wasn't obsessed with at the time. But seeing him as Jareth, yeah well that changed instantly for me...I am sure you will hear from me again before I am finished reading your stuff. I am a loyal fan or yours now and fear now, just cause you cut off my kings hair. You have not lost me as a reader.

Erm...I'm not sure why, but that text-conversation kinda confused me...

Still loved this story :D

Jareth... Maybe you should try a different approach in your courting. The things you try only seem to get her to think about various ways to end you.

Aww Jareth is being sooo cute! Come on, Sarah! I'm sure everyone else ships you two! Get with the times!

I'm still not sure how I feel about Mycroft. I think I like him, but then other times I'm not sure.

That's the best way to wake up unwanted company, Jareth.

At least Sarah has some priorities in order. Showers are very important, especially if there is a fight for hot water.

Poor Mrs. Hudson. I hope that dude got his due. I love the fact that she hid the phone in her bra though. One of my favorite teachers in high school always did that.

Wow... Sarah is being kind of mean in the end of this chapter... I get why, but ouch.

I didn't know that about the music box. I figured that the song would have been the same from the movie.

I've never gotten the chance to read A Doll's House, but I've been very curious what it was about.

I'm not a huge fan of Linda. I never have been, and I'm glad to know that that won't change anytime soon. Which part did she play in The Music Man?

Sarah just needs to open to her eyes to her feelings towards Jareth. I admit the ringtone would make anyone hesitate, but he was willing to endure her mother's company for quite some time. Not only does he deserve a kiss, or two, he deserves a sainthood I'm sure.