"But at a price.' Anna winked. 'And I don't mean gold." *cue Careless Whisper*

Haha really though I don't know why I've never read this story. I think I've always been turned off by modern AUs for some reason, but reading this, it's very well-written and realistic so far.

God I seriously love this story ! I could read it over and over again and still love it . The flow was good and the ending oh my god all my feels 3 I totally love it!

Oh my gosh! This was one of the best Fire Emblem Awakening story I ever read! I totally loved it! Great job with the action!

Good job!

Yes this story is so epic , these arcs man, just so boss , are you continuing the story? Because this is just too awesome! Tip my hat to you sir

I liked this story very much! Despite a few grammar issues here and there, I really liked the story! :) Please keep writing moreeee :)

You're amazing at writing fighting scenes! I thought Chrom died forever *sniff, sniff* The ending was absolutely perfect. Thank you so much for writing this story!

I just got to the most recent chapter and all I can say is wow. The story is complex that I always feel like ripping my hair out due to the complication. But the story is amazing, I love it! I felt so guilty towards Sumia since I'm not a huge supporter of the two. But you made me see a different light. For that I thank you LOL. Can't wait for the next update!

I just started reading this and I had to force myself to stop cause I was so sleepy x_x but anyways, its such a different storyline than the others. I really like the development so far. Im not done reading it and I'm definitely excited to read the rest. It amazes me how you can create such a plot like this and I hope that Chrom will find her again, even if she's just right next to him. Man, it pains me to see a love triangle like that because I know one of them has to sacrifice something dear.

You have successfully played with my feelings. Looking forward to the rest of the story and your updates!

So good! More please, this is great! :D

Ah, this chapter. I really enjoyed this chapter. Great work, as always! Keep it up!

Hmm, this is getting interesting. Update soon.

More please! :D

(continued from my review on chapter 14, I messed up and posted too soon)
And why did Sumia want Chrom to take Cynthia? I hope it will all be clear as I read more, but I feel so bad for Cynthia at the moment and I feel like both Chrom & Sumia should have known it would hurt her to some extent because they're finding Lucina's real mother. I would think that Sumia would want to at least have her child by her side, her letting Chrom have both is so self-sacrificial.

I was tearing up reading Cynthia's feelings, all the scenes involving her are so emotional and well done and I also think it is her personality to cover things up and pretend to be happy/cheerful when she really isn't. I really loved everything involving Cynthia. I wish Chrom and Robin would spend more time with Cynthia and make her feel more welcome but Chrom always goes on about trying to find Robin. Yeah that's his true love but what about his daughter :( And I cringed when he scolded Cynthia and said that they went over this and that the Sumia she sees is not her mother and someone else. He's not gentle about it at ALL. I felt so bad for her.

So now I'm really wondering how the love triangle will be resolved and what Chrom is planning to do. If he decides to stay that's unfair to Cynthia (never sees mother again I'm thinking?) but if he goes back in time one of the kids dies? I half hope they pick Cynthia because I love tragic endings XD

I'm also wondering about this mysterious figure that came...Maybe Grima? But I thought Robin killed Grima so..hmm...and also the whole Sumia is probably from the past thing...also confusing. I'll wait and see what finds out!

Obviously your story makes me feel a lot of things haha I really love it. Thank you for the great read, seriously. And good luck with university and your drawing! :D Oh one more thing, I liked that scene where Sumia dropped the flowers right after she heard Chrom's dating Robin. Ah, really hope love triangle gets resolved without Sumia and Cynthia getting hurt too much, I love those characters..Sorry for the long review & that it was split into two parts, and thanks again!

Hi! Sorry, I would have reviewed every chapter but I read the whole story so far on my cell phone before going to bed over the past 3 days. Chrom/female MU isn't really my cup of tea, well neither is Chrom/Sumia for that matter, but I'm in love with your writing after starting your story Masquerade (I still have to catch up on that one!). I'm not a fan of any of the pairings but the concepts and plot line really kept me reading more! I always play male MU and marry him to Sumia actually, so while reading I'm half hoping he will come and whisk poor Cynthia (and Sumia) away haha!

I hope I remember most of the comments I wanted to say while reading, well...here goes! Your characterization is so spot-on, it really shows with Robin and also Lucina, they react exactly the way I'd expect them to. I think those stand out to me because I dislike their personalities in game XD I also really like the way you wrote Sumia, she's such a sweet wife who seems to be very in tune with Chrom's feelings. I'm happy that she wasn't written to be some psycho because she's not the main pairing of this story. Sumia is actually very nice and sweet so it's nice to see she retained it!

But I've seriously been wondering WHY did Chrom take Cynthia as well? And why is Sumia