why do you refer to nagisa in three different names even when talking to one person or in the same paragraph? other than that i like it. 6 out of 10

It isn't a great fan fiction but try to add more chapters

update pls. and keep on nagisa chieri hehe

That was sweet. I like the child-like innocence.

That is just so, so sweet :) I know there will be a romance fic between two of my favourite characters in AKB0048. I love how you describe their personal feelings for each other, the atmosphere during Atsuko's birthday, and the way you describe the reflections of the water as if it was to reflect the affections and the developing bonds they have for each other.

It's good to see a shjojo-ai fic where it is not gratuitous fan-service at all :3

More please! Also, who was the other author? I'm open to all pairings, with the exception of maybe KanataXSonata, because they're sisters. Incest is not always Wincest. And I normally think of KanataXMimori

update soon love it

...They should've continued the anime... sobs, but Sonata's voice actress(Kuumin) graduated... NagiCheiri Kawaii Nagisa is Acchan

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Até que enfim uma historia yuri de AKB0048.
continua, please!