Great story so far! I see you have not updated it in quite a while and hope that your muse for it will return soon.

that was great. hope elijah won't give stefan too much of a third degree and kol leaves lydia the hell alone soon

Please update soon!
Please update soon!

The story is amazing and so well written.
Elijah and Renay are so cute.
The Bond... Oh boy! :P
I like the concept and the way you write.
But i have one suggestion. Please don't do a love triangle with Kol-Lydia-Stefan.
It'll be an imitation of the Damon-Elena-Stefan triangle. Kol and Damon being the same bad boys who never get the girl. Who treat the girl badly in the starting and then fall in love. Stefan will be jumping out of a love triangle only to fall into another one. One with an Original in it, nonetheless.
I would love if this was only a Stefan/OC story.
Again, it's just a suggestion. Your writing is really creative so i can't blame you if you do end up doing this love triangle. But please take that into consideration.
Hasn't poor stefan suffered enough on TVD? :P

Who is Elijah love interest? A bit confused sorry really gd though

Hey,
I'm writing you another review, because I think you get Nos says many as you would deserve...
I think that chapter is a good one, too. Maybe a little short, but a good one.
Just one question: will Elijah be together with Lydia, or with her mother, because at the first chapter it looked more like the mother...
S

PLEASE write more

Hey,
I think the first chapter ist really good. I like it a lot. I hope you will write the next one fast. I'm looking forward to the new chapter.
Selina