Lol that was such a cute ending haha

This was fantastic!

Awwww, this is excellently done. I especially liked how you opened the story :)

Jim would hardly call Spock 'commander' while talking with Bones or anyone really.

Calling him James feels wrong, very few people ever called him James.

why are you calling him James? they never call him James and he would call himself Jim, never James.

Haha, great interaction between the big three. That last part was great too

Cool idea with the planet and the water and side effects. Poor Spock, no luck with logic on disease. And it's hard to use a lot of words when you need to puke.

I love how Spock used numbers to explain his pull to go down. And no one can beat Spock when it comes to pulling rank or calling out regulations

I like the banter with the three boys, great stuff. McCoy would be secretly susceptible to flattery, good detail to note.

What do you mean Spock never felt sadness? He had to have been sad and lonely growing up as well as sad when his planet blew up or at least at the service for it and the anniversary...?

I love Chekov, he is so adorable! Great camaraderie here, shows the family nature of the crew

Wow, I loved the detail about "fine" and the build up, great attention to detail and way to build up suspense while showing the growing friendship between Spock and Jim

I am glad Uhura is here, maybe she can sing to Spock. It was nice of McCoy to stop by too

Haha, you certainly nailed McCoy, always love his sense of humor when he teases Jim