Great story! Love these two. One of my all time favorite couples! Thanks for sharing!

Nice twist!

Great start. I'm intrigued! Great writing

Another beautiful and hilarious story!I enjoyed every moment of it,thank you,loved it!Rick/Dee Dee ALWAYS AND FOREVER...

What a lovely story! Thank you for sharing! Do you have one that goes with it about how Hunter and McCall got together? Or their wedding? I would love to read them.
Thanks for sharing!
Vi

Thank you, and yes in 16 years poor Rick will busy fighting off the boys his daughter will be bringing home!

very nice, onto the next chapter!

So glad you were able to complete this story. I absolutely love your twists. Bravo!

So what is the baby's name? Inquiring minds need to know! Glad to see you found an ending for this one, even if you had to borrow it from another story. :-) The double hidden marriage and pregnancies gives it a farcical feel, which the show itself adopted on occasion (Payback, for instance).

As a working mom, nothing grinds my gears more than the old chestnut of "someone else is raising your children" (trust me when I say my daughter is crystal clear on who her parents are), but Hunter is old fashioned enough that I can imagine him saying such a thing. More than that, I think it would make sense not to have two parents in the line of fire, if possible!

I hope you find something else in your bag of tricks soon.

LOL, looking forward to your next update.

Unexpected with Malone and Tate...but nice-)

Great start.

Good start, Juliann. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Well, I am intrigued to know where all of this sneaking around is leading! And yes, Hunter and McCall, you may have to rethink your definition of discreet when you are talking about sex over the police radio. Oopsies!

Very nice story keep the chapters coming(quickly)