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That was amazing. You're a fabulous writer :)

That last line has me in tears. I thought they were going to live! Good job though!

I cried and I still am. Thanks for the story

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
My dreams are ruined

That was depressing but well written.

Now I feel like a really unhappy starfish that was mistaken for a fish and shoved in the oven, and after being half-baked was thrown back in the sea, but has been washed out of the sea and is now longing for cool water.
Only the 'unhappy' bit is because of you, the rest is because I fell asleep in the sun. I don't know why I'm sharing this with you, but have fun now that you know I'm in double pain, from the sunburn and your phanfic.

That was so sad! I'm crying now...

:'( I can actually imagine they I one of them committed suicide the other one would as well, I can't imagine a world with only one:'(

This is amazing. Really sad but great.

This was brilliant and really sad but brilliant wow.

Jesus on a boat.
You just gave me so many feels.
That last line... Just argh.
Way to make me cry.

I shouldn't love this as much as I do. This is really good!