mooooooonlight~

Kakashi...

Really beautiful.
I loved..!

Very sweet ending to the chapter

Hey so glad you posted the last bit, it was worth it! So glad its a happy ending. Loved the comparison of sun and moon

Very sad, poor Kakashi. Glad he has Gai to take care of him

That's such a lovely story :) I like how you've kept Kakashi strong yet made him weak. I would love to see how he handles waking up the next morning. I think Gai makes a lovely dream catcher!

Such a great story!

Look forward to this! Love this pair and I also love that you spelled it 'Guy.' Can you believe I saw some harpy going on about 'don't Americanize his name' on some other person's fic? Ridiculous-I have the Road to Ninja special edition DVD that had Road to Guy as a bonus and a character sketch/profile booklet, and in all that sh*t, his name is spelled 'Guy,' as in, it's supposed to be that way, but of course his name is katakana'd (then romanized) into 'Gai.'

I love the way you created the atmosphere and the emotions of the characters. Some concrit is: you tend to flip between past & present tense-one of the best writers I know does this, so I think it;s just something you should look out for especially in editing-and sticking to your favorite tense would be a plus. For what it's worth, I think there's something stimulating and visceral about present tense ;D

I can't wait to see how this goes! It's very good.