Reviews for The Unforeseen Variable |
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Kaiimei chapter 1 . 7/19 Don't forget that Dumbledore was 115 when he was killed, witches and wizards live much longer lives than Muggles. The life expectancy of the average wizard was 137.75 years, and the oldest wizard known was Barry Wee Willie Winkle, who celebrated his 755th birthday in 1991. So if Harry had 14 decades of life, he was only 25 years older than Voldemort, who was still pretty physically spry, despite fighting in at least three separate wars. But whatever, having him die like that is just a catalyst I guess. |
Guest chapter 32 . 1/4 well i do hope you keep righting it my good man. |
OrdealOfMc chapter 1 . 12/8/2019 I thought I'd share my thoughts on why I'm reading original. You know how when you were a small kid and drawn something, and it looked absolutely brilliant to you, but you wanted to perfect it, and tried to redraw it? but when you did, but the result was no genuine-looking in your eyes, and that imperfect first drawing looked so much more lovely in your eyes? yeah, this is the same... from the surprising plot, and holes that lead us down the plotting rabbit hole, to story telling that feels just right in my eyes, I love this story;* |
Nikkless chapter 17 . 10/31/2019 ill be dropping this fic it became idiotic and stupid it was quite good until last chapter. |
Nikkless chapter 16 . 10/31/2019 didint like this chap |
Nikkless chapter 16 . 10/31/2019 wtf is this about harry giving the hallows away? thats just stupid |
Nikkless chapter 13 . 10/31/2019 harry opposed to sneaking around he has a invisibility cloak |
Nikkless chapter 10 . 10/30/2019 yes at last magic |
Nikkless chapter 6 . 10/30/2019 dosent harry know occulemens |
Nikkless chapter 6 . 10/30/2019 this really feels like an oc with the same name as harry and im really annoyed about harrys magic . otherwise the fic is interesting |
Nikkless chapter 4 . 10/30/2019 really hope can use his own magic soon |
Nikkless chapter 3 . 10/30/2019 so he has the hollows but still cant use his own worlds magic. |
Nikkless chapter 2 . 10/30/2019 and i really hope that he can use his own worlds spells or this will be a lot more boring |
Nikkless chapter 2 . 10/30/2019 so he lost the hallows. hope he gets them back |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/24/2019 That is a nightmare, I never understood the want to live forever when those around you will not. |