I enjoy these oneshots :) very cute and well done! I would suggest that you ease up on using “he” as a pronoun though. It’s a tad confusing. For example you wrote once from John’s perspective using “he” and in the next paragraph switched to Sherlock’s but continued to say “he”. It took me a second to catch on that you were referring to Sherlock. Otherwise these are very good one shots!

That's it? What about Reichenbach?

Well, as a Sherlockian, 3 years is not too late to come back to this.

...Guess I'll just have to write it myself. ;)

In response to your a/n, as a writer that happens to me ALL THE TIME. It is very frustrating when a good idea is lost to a forgotten memory.

The characters are very much in character. Only thing besides typos due to fast typing I assume is in this line: He knew it must had been hard for Sherlock to deal with him the past week, since he had been too focused on himself, filled with guilt an doubts, change the first had to have. Again, you were probably just typing fast.

I was debating whether or not I would regret reading this chapter after seeing the angst warning, but I enjoyed it. I would have read it no matter what. I can't wait to read the rest of this fic. You are a great writer. Don't worry about the characters being ooc. You've done a good job so far.

This might be my favorite chapter so far. I love the way you separated things into categories. From what I've heard, some asexuals appreciate that John does not force Sherlock to make compromises other than making tea.

I loved the first two chapter. They are a very interesting read. One story, two points of view. Can't wait to read the third and see how you chose to continue.

Are you going to continue this story? Its very well written and very nice.

Well, since it's been over a year, my guess is that your never going to continue updating this. I'm disappointed it was never fi8, but thanks for posting what you have. I've really enjoyed reading it.

Really enjoying this so far! Would love for a chapter to circle back around to the story line with Harry and John's dad. Please update soon!

Jess

Oh my, this is one of the best Sherlock fics I have ever had the plesure of reading! Excuse me if there are any spelling or gramatical errors in this review, I'm writing this on a touch screen at 12 o'clock at night!
Hmm, do you mind if I write a review of the whole stiory up to now on this chapter, I'd hate to spam you! Well, I think it'd be best to start off with the negitives first. There arn't that many negative s that I can spot other than the ocasional missing of letters(I've only spotted it happening three times thriugh out this whole story) and the fact that twice yiu've used 'worst' instead of 'worse'. I think one you might have put Sherlock in John position and vice versa.

Other than those few things I have nothing but praise for this fic! Normally with Johnlock fics they're either smut filled(For some reason that makes me uncomfortable, might come from the fact that I see Sherlock as an asexual character) or have Sherlocks asexualality being 'fixed' by John. That once again makes me uncomfortable because it makes aseuality out to be something to be fixed. When I read the first few paragraohs of the first chapter I was a littlemput off because you seemed to be describing Sherlock as aromantic instead on asexual, but then I finished the chapter and I was incredibly happy! You made John extremely accepting of Sherlocks orientation and this story just seems really natural and is just plain awesome! Thank-you for taking your time to write this,
-Scar

Could you update this soon? It's one of my favorite fics, and I hate seeing another chapter not be posted!

You're a great writer! I loved it! Are you doing to be posting more?

Mrs. Hudson had been abused by "her" husband, not "his" husband.

Okay, so I commented on this at chapter seven, that I would have thought everyone would have seen Sherlock and John's relationship coming. Here, right in the first chapter, you say that everyone, including Moriarty, saw that John was Sherlock's heart. It's easy to wind up with plot holes when stories get long (my longest fanfic is 44 chapters and, believe me, there are some HUGE inconsistencies), but I'd appreciate it if you could find a way to fix this one.

Last page: "John shook his head," not "John shocked his head."

I'm sorry. I'm way too critical. I do love your story.

The language seems perfect in this chapter. Please keep writing at your convenience. I do enjoy this. :)