Definitely a good start and a very differnt idea... love it so far... gives off the right amount of creepy and dull emotions on Bellas end. Cant wait to see her shell crack a bit.

im liken this story
i dunno what TWCS is can you plz let me now

Question! Is there anyway you can make your menu move on your blog? When you scroll down to read your story the menu covers half the page:/ its not a major thing just take ups alot of room. Thanks, i love your stories!

So glad that you e made the decision to move your stories instead of pulling them entirely. I look forward to reading you over at TWCS!

I am glad I will still be reading you over on the other sites. I was worried you were stopping. I really love your writing and differently miss Irish Edward! ;)

Go ahead and let the Southern girl out we know how take care of ourselves and kick some butt!

Hope to read us soon! :)

can you explain this whole idea selling thing? It's funny you mention the clique thing because I have been reading Fanfiction for 5 years and lately all the betas or kudos no matter who I read are the same names over and over? I am strictly a reader but one of the best parts of FF was looking at other peoples "favorites" and finding great new stories it's probably how I found you but it's honestly a challenge to find anything from new authors so your rant was very eye opening! I have gone to Wordpress to read CARANO and the author of the Quiet Storm series so good for you for standing up for yourself!

I don't think I follow you on FB but, I would love to. I am judi exclusiverob wilo. please follow me. I don't want to loose contact with your stories or any updates.

Edward is a very good man!

Glad Bella realized that it was Billy and her old life that was keeping her away from something that would be holding her back. Not only sexually, but emotionally with Edward.

What an incredible chapter! Loved it!

Billy new all about the money... Guess that's why he was wanting to marry her, right?

Jacob! OH NO! How did he find her?

What is up with Jess and Heidi?

Yes, it was great to read a EPOV. Always nice to read the other side :)

I'm loving Rosalie :)