Xena isn’t a planet... do you mean Eris?

i like your plot but a lot of what is happening needs to be interpeted through the conversations making many situations quite vage

DRELL! My favorite species is alive and is about to team up with humanity

Great story.

Interesting story, too bad it seems to have withered on the vine

This story is good, if a little depressing, because what I liked most about ME is not around anymore (Tali and the Quarians, Wrex and the Krogans... at least the Rachni survived)... I hope you'll eventually continue this story.

Hey this is a great story. I hope you continue this soon.

well I guess that answers my last question. I hope one day you are able to continue this great story.

First let me say this is a great story, and even though I am nearing the end of what will likely ever be posted I am glad I found it. And I think you for writing it.

The end of this chapter does not make much sense to me, the Yahg found them? How? unless the Quarian told the Yahg or they can track the stealth ship how could they possibly have found them?

I likeit

Awesome story.

Super, super interesting! Thank you, I enjoyed it so much!

First Contact with the Rachni! :D

Still an entertaining read, one thing though: when you have them split into groups to reach the node, it doesn't really make much since for Shepard and Moon to be in the same group. their the two highest ranking officers their. ideally, Moon, Sheppard, and Benson would each be leading a group.

Omigod! This is fantastic! I just love it so much! Can't wait to see how the next chapter goes! Keep up the great writing and thanks for sharing this with us!