Anyway, I know it's been years since this was published, but if you read this I would just like to say how much I really enjoyed this story - it was so funny it even made me laugh out loud!
So, thank you for writing it :D

He was really bad at being a police man, but that made it more amusing.

Aghhhhh the cuteness!

This is really good! I loved the ending! :D

Now, that's flirtation. You've really caught the balance of menace and humor and desire from the "Please talk slower" scene in the movie. I like.

Bwahahahhahahaaa! Oh it seems that Roxie isn't the only one capable of making flirtatious comments and innuendo laced conversations. Hee hee. LOVE IT! _

The funniest and most romantic Megamind story I've read so far. Too funny!

hay solo a megamente se le ocurriría algo asi

This is absolutely hilarious, and completely spot-on with the characters! I was grinning like an idiot at multiple points, most noticeably when she says "they were all you, weren't they?" And of course at the "loony stalker" bit. I love how the irony is lost on him.
All in all, I love this!

ROFL! I love it! :) Great job again!

Absolutely loved this short story! Who said Megaman was getting predictable?! I loved his police act "Don't make me frisk you!" Heh! Your characterisation is always spot on!
Keep up the good work!

Hilarious!

"...stalked by some loony who was obsessed with her?" Yeah. Loony is to kettle as Megamind is to pot.

Okay, first: Megamind is a drama queen, surprising no one. Second: I'm not sure this fits the movie. If she was checking for eye colors, wouldn't she have noticed that Bernard had brown eyes (I think; he was rather forgettable) and "Bernard" had that precise shade of green? Or had she just forgotten? ...Yeah, I'm just pointlessly nitpicking now. Seriously, though, good story.

OH. MY. GOSH! I am literally fangirling right now. Bravo, well done!

Ha! This is so funny! I loved the originality of it, it had me laughing pretty good at parts. Thanks for the great read!