Reviews for Firsts |
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ninewood chapter 4 . 8/29 That was so sweet. |
ninewood chapter 3 . 8/29 Awwwww... That was cute! Painful, but cute! |
ninewood chapter 1 . 8/29 I saw a photo of Norman Reedus as a kid on a bike with a big smile and scraps on the one side of his face. This reminded me of that photo. Well done, Murphy. |
ktschott7 chapter 4 . 3/16/2016 I know you wrote this year's ago but I wanted to tell you I have enjoyed it so far. It is surprisingly difficult to find stories focused mainly on the brothers without making it slash or adding a female OC. I know the chances of you picking this back up again are slim but just so you know, if you do, I would love to read it. |
cemmia chapter 4 . 6/9/2014 Aww.. They are adorable.. Great chapters.. |
BoondockAngel chapter 1 . 12/7/2013 These are adorable. So glad you put them in the M category (language) or I never would have found them. Please write more! Your insight is really, really amazing. |
Valerie E. Mackin chapter 4 . 8/10/2013 Oh, you are tugging at all the heartstrings. |
Valerie E. Mackin chapter 3 . 8/10/2013 I think this is my favorite chapter so far. |
Valerie E. Mackin chapter 2 . 8/10/2013 Seriously, how do you get in his head like that? Another fantastic chapter spectacularly done. I have no idea how I missed this for so long! I won't miss the next one, I'll tell you that. |
Valerie E. Mackin chapter 1 . 8/10/2013 This was absolutely amazingly done, and I have no idea how I've missed it for two and a half months. Descriptions are fantastic, the interplay between the boys spot on; I could absolutely see everything that was going on, and I swear on that last hill my heart went a little bit into my throat. And your narrative style, oh, I am so...this is the kind of voice I try so hard for sometimes and just can't quite get, and you just flow with it here. I can not wait to read the next chapter. |
kungfupandabear chapter 4 . 7/28/2013 Ah so cute! |
DucksFan1510 chapter 4 . 7/27/2013 Aaaaaaawwwwwww. I don't think there's any other words to express my feelings towards that story :) |
DucksFan1510 chapter 3 . 7/17/2013 These were so adorable. Please write more? Connor and Murphy are so sweet. Last chapter got to me :) |
BBC chapter 3 . 6/21/2013 Connor and his stupid rope! No wonder Murphy detests it so much later on in life. This was a really cute chapter, apart from all of poor Murphy's suffering. I really liked the end where Connor gives Murphy his coins but then Murphy goes and gives them all back to Connor. They love each other so much! |
kungfupandabear chapter 3 . 6/16/2013 Aw! So cute! I love it! Bromance is a beautiful thing. |