Ahhhhh this was so good! x_X I'm very very sorry to hear it's just a one shot, but really enjoyed reading it, and Cain's devastation that Abel is in enemy hands. Angst is my favourite lol XD although you can bet I'll be imagining lots of hurt/comfort, followed by a happy ending for those two! *cries* Thanks for posting!

This is great! I can't wait to see what happens next!

I know you said this was just a one shot but it's really a half shot or a story beginning that's just hanging begging plllleeeeaaassse write what happens next. Like a cliff hanger just hanging! I hope you reconsider and write more cause as a story beginning it is really really good and interesting!

Thus was THE VERY BEST one-shot I have ever read!

this is one of the best ive read so far, very well written, and close to the style of the original. I really wish it wasnt a one shot. thankyou for the good read- no, it was great. short, but great :)

My freaking feels...!

I like the start!

This is so crazy for me right now! My sister and I were just talking about Cain and Abel fanfiction earlier TODAY and I look on your page and BOOM paradox! Thank you for being rad!

Oh my god I really really love the feeling this conveys. This reads really well...I love the attention to dialogue. I also like that this story focuses on only the important details...every single word is written for a reason and it doesn't waste time talking about how each of the characters walk from one place to another - not that any other stories in this specific fandom do that either, heh - but anyways...gosh, I couldn't stop frowning while I was reading this, and I mean that in the best way possible. I just felt all of Cain's emotions: his drive and stubbornness to rescue HIS Abel, and how he needed Ethos to help him, and poor baby Daniel oh my gosh. Ugh the whole thing just gave me chills. I hope to God that you update this soon because I'm loving it so far! I really wanna know what happens next...if Cain and Danny can rescue Ethan.

I like this

Wow is this a kick ass story! Dear God that image of Abel bound and gagged is so horrific, and Cain's anguish with him sobbing in the Reliant so real. Abel must at least know Cain will come for him. I hope...and the whole Ethos-Deimos part is wonderful; I can't wait for more of this I hope soon please!

ouch. I love Cain and Ethos' relationship in this, even if Ethos doesn't offer to help, they're really sort of sweet and sad together. And that scene in the cafeteria with Abel-how very properly horrifying. D: Poor Abel and poor Cain, I'm very much looking forward to seeing where else this goes.

Gah x_x I was not ready for all those feelings. This is so great, please continue, it's wonderful!

wow, this was amazing! i really hope there's another chapter!