I'll admit I was a tad worried about this when I saw the summary for this story, but's actually rather pleasant and rather cute. I love the idea of Ten meeting a young Marian, and him telling her that Robin's not all bad.

I love this so far! please continue, I must see what Marian and the Doctor can get up to! :)

You're back woo! I loved this and I can't wait until they start talking again.

*Finz*

Aww! Poor Marian. I love how the story is developing... Keep it up!

Yah you continued! You got Marian, Robin, and Much's character practically spot on and I love the fact that she punched Robin. I can't wait to see the Doctor though and what he thinks of this new Marian.

*Finz*

Dear genius,
Do you know what this story is? It is potential, wrapped up in a beautiful little box. I can already see the character and story development, and for such a short chapter, that's amazing. I adored your characterization of the Doctor. You got his emotions spot-on, not to mention your superb portrayal of his physical actions. I also loved the little mention of Robin and Much, and I would love to see Marian become friends with them over the Doctor's next few visits. I can't believe I've never really considered the 10/Marian dynamic, because it really is so good. Marian embodies the inner beauty and outer beauty and strength of all the Doctor's companions. I was so sad when I saw this only had one chapter! Incredibly well written, I hope to see more chapters soon! Feel free to bounce ideas off me if you're stuck!

-toxicjade

Continue! Please continue!

You should definitely continue this, this is brilliant!:)

Sounds awesome! Keep it up!