Pretty good story so far. Keep updating! Also, I don't mean to be too picky, but there are a couple of small mistakes in your summary. Firstly, it's spelled cacoon, not caccoon, a butterfly emerges from a chrysalis, not a cacoon (it's moths that have cacoons), and when it comes out, it doesn't stumble around in confusion. It hangs on the chrysalis and waits for its wings to dry off and happily flutters away. Again, I don't mean to be too picky, but it's true.

I'm sooo in love with this story! Are you considering to continue writing it? (I hope the answer is yes w)

Please update soon!

love to know what happens next

LOVE IT!

Awww, this was better than the movie, please, continue

Please make more chaptersXD

Are you going to keep writing? I love the story so far... Please keep writing!

interesting

very well written story and a wonderful idea for an alternative ending! :-)
I think it's hard to describe behavior, acting, talking etc. of the characters in the same way like it's described in the movie. But you really did a good job!
The movie touched me, so did your story. I hope, you'll continue that! Greets from Germany :-)

Wonderful job. This is really good. I really enjoyed it.

Loved this

Dude update! I want to read more!

Awwww that's so cute and really good writing again keep posting love the story!

That's so cute