| Reviews for Once Burned, Twice Shy |
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   HyperA1985 chapter 1 . 6/18/2017 I am looking forward to chapter 4 and I hope Naruto becomes the new Batman. |
| The Unforgiven one 19901 chapter 3 . 1/23/2017 pretty good story so far |
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/5/2017 PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON PLZ UPDATE SOON |
| Primus2021 chapter 3 . 1/1/2016 Melanie's super anti-hero name "Neko-Onna" aka Catwoman. |
| Skelo chapter 3 . 3/29/2015 Knife thing made me laugh. Awesome! More |
| BlackScyther chapter 3 . 3/14/2015 Good chapter. As for whether Melanie should become Batgirl or not? I say yes, go ahead and do it. Out of the Batman Beyond girls, she certainly was the most fitting to become Batgirl. Also, like one other reviewer said, It'd certainly lead to interesting interactions with Team Batman. I can't wait for your next Chapter. |
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 3 . 3/8/2015 Ouch, Bruce is gonna be surprised:) |
| PugTheMagician chapter 3 . 3/7/2015 i like this story so far, its very fluffy but has plenty of action. on the suggestion for melanie being a new batgirl, that just doesn't sound like a good idea to me. i assume if she does go to the good side it would be because of naruto and thus be trained by her. as such bat girl doesn't really fit. i wonder, are you going to have her kill as well or not? for names, you could always go with the customary "vixen" with the fox theme and all, i honestly ain't a very original guy. i like that you gave a little insight into mel's thoughts on what SHE wants rather than her family |
| Apocalypse chapter 3 . 3/6/2015 This is good shit. Hilarious, too. Keep it up! I love your style of writing. In my top writers on this site. |
| DragonIroh chapter 3 . 3/6/2015 Great Chapter! I wouldn't mind Melanie becoming the new Batgirl, working alongside Naruto and completely separate from the other Bat-members. It'd certainly lead to interesting interactions with Terry, as well as Bruce and Barbara who certainly would disapprove of such a thing happening. |
| pitbull4567 chapter 3 . 3/6/2015 interesting chapter |
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/6/2015 I like no love this story man |
| pitbull4567 chapter 1 . 3/6/2015 interesting |
| Apedreitor chapter 3 . 3/6/2015 daaaaaaamn nice work there, by the way there is any chance thar you could be tempted with write another fic of this kind but using a mokuton wielding naruto and poison ivy? i actually only read only one a long time ago that was decent enough but was sadly a oneshot i believe you could make a great work with that pairing you are actually extremely good with fluffyness xD |
| jinx777 chapter 3 . 3/6/2015 :) |
