So it is very different from most of the Familiar of Zero fanfics out there. However I also would like to comment that, while it is interesting, I do believe that there are points in which we seemed to get incredibly side tracked and areas that dragged on longer than necessary. The writing it great, but the meat and potatoes seems to have fallen off. It feels like a whole lot of nothing beyond information dropping has been going on since the end of the dancing plague.

chapter 15 and now i shall hope for more chapters

This is A AMAZING story i am on chapter 14 right now but i really am hoping for new chapters to come soon like this is just AMAZING i am entranced by the current chapters i have read and i really hope that you might come back to the story the dancing fever the ice statues the writing style really reminds of one of my favorite writers and i would love to see this story come to a end / conclusion. :D

Well that's a good reference to Anu.

A rather pathetically simplistic understanding of mental illness, but I suppose I shouldn't expect better. It's the kind of deep-sounding nonsense TES has always been fond of.

love the ethical discussion between colbert and talin. And holy crap, the dragonborn was sent into the past and became the familiar Joseph del Gallia? I did not expect that. The only critism I can say is that you seemed to make Joseph a little bit too... moral from what we see in the manga. Or it might just be the dragonborn's influence on him since he was a lad.

The champion is really a big mess of things. He mantled a Shezzarine, became a Daedric prince and is more or less a whole bunch of individuals under one oversoul.

As a big Elder Scrolls lore nerd I loved how you incorporated so much of into you story.

Nice pic man. That got me in to the story

He insults "The Eight?" What are you, Thalmor? Talos is a Divine too, he's pretty cool to talk to.

Great story keep the good work up

The adoring fan remark made me laugh more than it should have lmao.

Good chapter.
The planet in Familiar of Zero must be a Stealth Ship for it to pass through the Awareness of an Et'ada of the likes of Daedric Princes, though if it wasn't somehow protected, even without the Towers, Boundaries, and Aedric Influence, this story would not even have a plot, because malog ball or Dagon could end the entire reality of FoZ in a instant, it woud not really have any protection against cosmical beings on their scale, its likely even a Simple Dremora would have their parameters multiplied Tenfold without any limitations to Daedric influence.
Also good luck writing.

A great inticing story and it was enjoyable to learn more of the elder scrolls lore for being somewhat known for me. The scenes in the Mad God's world was a bit confusing for me, not knowing enough to understand. But what can you expect when dealing with a realm of madness. I'll be waiting for the next one and good luck with your things.

For a couple chapters, I'd say this fic became convoluted to the point of being unreadable. This last chapter was relatively straightforward, though, and didn't throw around too many names or in-universe technical terms, which makes a big difference to a reader like me, who is only a casual fan and unfamiliar with the lore of both series.