Ahh, I hope you continue these drabble-ish chapters, even if you NEVER find a plot. Your characterization and dialog are delightful. And even if the story as a whole doesn't yet have a point, each chapter seems to.

I'm hoping to see a couple of Capaldi/Twelve chapters before Whittaker/Thirteen starts up (cannot wait). Keep up the great work.

good story

If you plan on bringing in other Time Lords that might have survived, I can suggest one: The Rani! Being a bio chemist, if anyone could have figured out how to hide from the Time Lords, it would have been her.

I find it amazing that all of these special units do their best to lie to the public, instead of telling the truth,,,,,and though I love Tom Baker doctor I don't trust any of the other doctors.

A river may not be a good analogy for time, but River might be!

The Doctor brings up a interesting point in this chapter. I would suggest to any readers who want to know more, check out the Sylvester McCoy New Adventure series. Some interesting stories there that help with this point.

Okay . . . this could be entertaining.

Rory just annoyed the hell out of me, lol.

I think that one thing the Doctor needs to do, is a jump forward a few years to 2164 or there about, and see how Susan is doing, since the last time he saw her was in a version of his original incarnation, in the Death Zone.

And that is how the BBC could have launched an excellent Donna Noble spin-off. Brilliant!

Oh come now, look at the nixon files you idiots. he must have left something mentioning the silence.

Eh, i assume you watch Dreamland take it? will you be doing miracle days?

I LIKE this version of Martha. Much sharper and much more able to take on situations. She might be just the person to help out Torchwood, should something come up and they need some extra brainpower.

I will say this for TORCHWOOD: They made sure the briefing material was done right. Now, lets see what surprise you have in mind for the Doctor Donna. THIS I want to see!

I can't believe the USA didn't know about the Doctor from UNIT.

It also occurred to me that the doctor never has companions from the US, tho I might be wrong as I stopped watching after the fifth doctor, he annoyed the hell out of me.

I only recently started watching because I came across the christmas episode with Madame Vastra and her wife Jenny in it.

So no I cannot see the USA letting this go on, though they need a dedicated version of X-Com tho with less alien killing unless they show up uninvited.

This just shows you can't trust the Brits! LOL, just joking.
But I would like to see more if the focus is Americans getting their act together and being competent.