| Reviews for Damn John! |
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  Guest chapter 10 . 4/5/2014 This was amazing! I loved reading it. Danara has no idea what's she/he is talking about, you're writing is great (needs a bit of improvement) but it isn't sloppy. I think John and Sherlock where written out rather well, and Danara obviously thinks they are super human and can take down everyone who gets in their way. Anyways, it was great and you should write more! |
 Zellona chapter 4 . 2/4/2014 "If they're not together after this I will personally push them into each other and tell them to kiss" I just choked on my drink. THAT mental image just made my day! XD |
| jbug chapter 10 . 8/31/2013 Oh, what a wonderful story! I enjoyed it immensely. Keep writing and sharing with us! |
| cummberbitchin chapter 10 . 8/31/2013 THAT WAS BRILLIANT! AAAGGHH! THANK YOU FOR THAT! |
| Guest chapter 10 . 8/2/2013 Ahhhhh! Ohmygosh that was so cute! I loved this, I only just found this story and read it on one sitting! |
| ThatOneGingerKid chapter 10 . 8/2/2013 AAAAWWWWWWH! |
| Christine Eponine Watson chapter 10 . 8/2/2013 That was so cute! I loved the ending so much! It was a wonderful story. |
| ThatOneGingerKid chapter 9 . 7/14/2013 Whooo! |
| Danara chapter 1 . 7/14/2013 The writing is sloppy and needs work. It's a bit difficult to read. The characters seem weak and pathetic, very unlike the actual characters. John is a practical man, and Sherlock is no slouch in the fighting department. Together they would have disarmed all the bank robbers and resolved the whole situation in ten minutes or less (mainly by stopping it before it started, but I'll suspend my disbelief for a well-written tale). Involving Mycroft was even worse. There is no way he would have bothered with the money unless it was a ruse to distract the bad guys from the agents swarming the building. Seriously, think next time. Spelling isn't bad but punctuation needs work. Phrasing could be better but that's just a matter of practice. Keep it up and it'll improve with time. |
| basicallyeverything chapter 9 . 7/13/2013 JAWN! Ahah love it! Can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon! xx |
| alorawitch chapter 9 . 7/13/2013 Because Sherlock is a goddamn hero! Awesome action scene, that was really epic. Great job, but it's coming to an end, and that makes me sad :( |
| ThatOneGingerKid chapter 8 . 7/6/2013 Oh no, Sherlock... Whatever you're about to do, do not do the thing. |
| Rose O' Sharon chapter 1 . 7/6/2013 I am not laughing at your story. :D Actually, I am loving your story, particularly the first chapter, which is the only one I've read so far. Your summary of the premise was enough to capture my interest, and the well-written introspective chapter makes me want to see everything that comes next! Actually, what I am laughing at is the part in your author's note about what is weird looking up on Google. :D SO been there on the 'weird' front . . . medieval torture devices and other interesting items for fics come to mind. :D |
| ThatOneGingerKid chapter 7 . 6/29/2013 DRAMA! |
| Onee-chan-05 chapter 7 . 6/29/2013 LOVING THIS. Please continue! |
