Love this story. Darcy is so sweet and I really like the way you write the characters.

This was such an enjoyable read. I loved watching Darcy develop, and I found Elizabeth to be perfect. Thank you so much for sharing!

Thank you for sharing this entertaining story.
I thought the idea of the Colonel under his mother's thumb particularly clever.

"several hundred dollars' worth of debt," ... In England? In the 18 hundreds? Mmm.

Splendid!

Amazing story. I absolutely love reading it.

Should the author ever wish to make changes /corrections to it, I would recommend to change the currency mentioned: dollars...

What a delightful story! Thank you so much for exploring this "what if" and giving us such a sweet tale. I thought you did a phenomenal job of capturing Mr. Darcy's perspective. Kudos!

hi... I love the story . .. just one pointseveral hundred "dollars"? shouldn't it be pounds?

I loved this story
Miss Bingley's revenge was quite harsh, glad they didn't go through with it.

I have wanted Elizabeth and Darcy to just talk things out much earlier! So glad you wrote this scenario! Thank you for sharing this story!

What a sweet end. Thank you for this story! I couldn’t stop reading till I finished the story, even though it’s 5am here!

pounds dear, not dollars

So lovely

Again another superb story from you. Loved it. Hope to see you writing more soon.

Loved the story until this chapter. It is waaay over the top. It totally kills the story for me.