HAHA I LOVED IT! When Fury was chewing Tony out and then praised him, I was thinking of how the Emperor was doing the same to Mulan.

So he wakes up and within minutes is slapped by a backstabbers and kicked of a team he was never even officially put on to in the first place wow. Such loving friends he picks.

So Awsome!

It is dying,not dieing. Same with lying-not lieing. When you add ing to verbs ending on ie (lie, die), ie becoms y

i just read this chapter while listening to the Pirates of the Caribean soundtrack xD gotta love the last part

Jravis swearing! Yay! Just made my day!

God I nearly die when you crack a solemn moment into peaces for teaching thor how to use a microwave.

I like the little night at the museum reference

When I am reading this I had just finished another fanfiction where Clint actually had stitches in his side so for a minute there my mind just went huuuuuuughhh? At the laughing comment.

*cackling* ROCK HIM TONY BABY!

... that bastard. *stating the obvious is talking about fury destroying tony like that*

The present progressives of die and lie are *dying* and *lying*.

Ok, this was probably the most amusing avengers story friggin ever. It was awesome. It was funny, upsetting, and short enough to read in two hours... So I give it an 11 out of 10. I mean, not that we're rating or anything... But this story was awesome and I'll definetely be reading it again.

loveJLforever

cool.

the plot is interesting, but the grammatical errors are overbearing, and everyone is just too OOC. No one's motives really make much sense. Why did Pepper completely avoid Tony for so long and then suddenly promise to never leave him when she already did? Why did Fury go completely crazy from just a joke, and why did Tony laugh while being chased and take being beaten so calmly?