Reviews for Criss-Cross The Heart
theroyalrawr chapter 5 . 2/8/2014
Please continue! Tis sooo goodd! ;););)
Sinncity chapter 5 . 2/7/2014
Eeeeppp, I hope Dan gets his swearing under control. Or he will get the same treatment as Phill :/ Poor boys! On a side note, every time I try to imagine a hairless Dan or Phil it just doesn't compute. Like, I legitimately can not imagine them without their side fringe. Great chapter, can't wait for more :D
dontdreamitbeit14 chapter 5 . 2/5/2014
You cut off their hair, and I KILL YOU. Especially Phil's hair, it's so beautifully styled! Ha ha, do what ya want, I just have this fear of hair cuts and hair loss is all. Anyways, thanks for updating and I can't wait to see where you are taking this story. Like, how are the fans reacting to this? Like, they are pretty well known people, so someone must have realized they were gone by now. Also, will these creepy cult members ever figure out about Dan and Phil's fame and youtube channels and such? And how will they react to this? I also noticed that this is your first Dan and Phil story you have on your account. Are you ever gonna make more? Cuz you really rock at it! Also, it would be cool to see something like this happen, but under different circumstances. Like, if there was an MIM type situation in another story, but this time involving Dan and Phil. Idk, this story is interesting, but it would be cool to see how they would react to being kidnapped by semi-normal people than by these crazy cult members.
Guest chapter 5 . 2/2/2014
Phil-ball! Yessss. I've been looking for a Dan and Phil story like this!
swagUPwindowsDOWN chapter 5 . 2/2/2014
Woah Crumpet, this is good. Like seriously, where do you get your ideas from? It's amazing. I've only really just recently gotten into Phanfiction, so this is a first, but yours is definitely the best I've found. I can't wait to see what'll happen and if Dan will get told off for his bad mouth or if those creepy men will do anything to him. Great work, and if you ever need any help with any British things for this story, come to me 'cause they don't get more British than me! :D
anonymousfanfictiongeek chapter 5 . 2/1/2014
NOOOOOOO THEIR BEAUTIFUL HAIR ;-; aw so sad
4everBTR chapter 5 . 1/31/2014
Creeppppppy
Guest chapter 5 . 1/31/2014
Amazing! Can't wait till the next chapter! :)
Imaphan chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
Really like this!
winterschild11 chapter 5 . 1/31/2014
HAHAHAHAHA...scared by a doll
Sinncity chapter 4 . 1/26/2014
I would be mortified if I was ever in a situation like this. Its really well written and i love how dan and phil are able to comfort each other even though they have no control over then situation. If I was them I'd try my harded to pretend to follow their ways but never forget that it's a crazy ass religious cult and attempt to not be brain washed..but I'm sure it wouldn't be as easy as it sounds haha.
Keep up the great work!
Microwave chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
Aw poor Phil...who be creeping in?
Phanlover chapter 4 . 1/12/2014
Hey this is awesome!
dontdreamitbeit14 chapter 4 . 1/10/2014
Okay, first off excellent story and I hope you continue to expand with it! Second, did I just learn that you wrote Missing in Motion? Hell, I don't even like BTR but that is still one of my favorite stories ever! Man, knowing your writing style from that story, you could do awesome things with this one! Also, it would be very interesting to see how the creepy cult people would react if they figured out that Dan and Phil were youtube and radio stars, so will that ever happen?
anonymousfanfictiongeek chapter 4 . 12/21/2013
I always forget to review sorry but i really love this fic it really gets me please make a new chapter soon :)
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