Despite the weird paragraphing, good chapter overall

Interesting start

Nice to see another chapter, but you're still capitalizing certain minor words unnecessarily like you did previously.

Glad to see it updated

"I didn't ask for this!" Tatsurion exclaimed. "I didn't ask for wings! I evolved!" he exclaimed as his wings went into his back.

"Oh," Prickle-Back chuckled. "So now we're evolved," he said. "Aren't we special?"

"Cut it out!" Miss Martian yelled, flying up and sending the two Quillspikes back. "He never asked for this! This is just the way he is! Why can't you just accept it and back off?!"

Everyone looked to M'gann with surprise.

"Whoa, M'gann, calm down!" Ray called out. "It's not your problem."

Miss Martian panted as she flew down. "Sure feels like it." She said as Allie helped her regain her composure.

"Easy there, Megan," Allie said. "I've got you."

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Oh yeah, I figured that would be emotional.

XD everyone seems to insult water, and go " no offensese"

Love this, a great little Christmas gift. A update from you. :D

at long last is back thanks

Can't wait for more

Katana, huh? Nice!

well that sucks that isao won't become the light master but as he says he is a stubborn old goat then meh it matters not

well it looks like that both ray and zatanna managed to make the right decision and now it is time for chapter 13

well that sucks with luthor having those words of control over connor it sucks and it's time for the next chapter

well that sucks that gargle is banished and now it's time for the next chapter because I'm done with this one

I understand super so now it's time for the next chapter and I hope that m'gann can tell them the team the truth

well that's cool with lucy protecting their secret -and laughs at what is happening to carny-dang that is funny

well let's see how the next chapter goes because it looks like the choten has allied himself with a guy who runs a chemical lab that's not good