Reviews for Aloha Pokémon!
Althea Sirius chapter 9 . 2/10/2019
I wish they did that kind of reunion in the show, that had me smiling the whole time!
Matt chapter 39 . 4/28/2018
WILL YOU PLEASE UPDATE YOUR NEW VERSION OF THIS STORY ALREADY!?
jbadillodavila chapter 1 . 9/13/2017
Genial gf
AutisticPhantomOtaku chapter 39 . 9/3/2017
If you're planning on adding Experiment 000 A.K.A. Cyber (from Stitch the series) to this story, you think you going to have Clemont catch him? I think he would be a good choice to catch Cyber, since Clemont would most likely catch him in an effort to use his powers for good instead of evil, which is basically the whole point of the story.
Rocker on chapter 39 . 8/31/2017
Nice! Glad to see you're still alive. Don't worry about it, take your time with making the reboot, just as long as you feel it's good, it will be good. Don't put too much pressure on yourself to finish the next one, it's only a story after all. Make sure that you like it first, then you can post it. I'd recommend posting at regular intervals if you get a lot of chapters done before-hand. That way you have time to work on all the later chapters. Make sure to keep the extra copies of it somewhere safe. Wouldn't want to lose the whole thing before posting, right? Maybe post it on Deviantart too to get more views.

On a side note, nice little bit with the short story. And, yes, if Jumba invented an experiment that allowed her to do that, she would. I might too, except for a... SMALL fear of falling. Maybe I'll just stick to working out with Kixx.
Rocker on chapter 38 . 5/11/2017
I'm just here to ask if you have an idea yet. It has been a while, and we can't wait for a new story forever. If you're going through a lot of rough stuff, I understand. Here's hoping you can get your muse back though.
Zatch Bell-01 chapter 10 . 5/9/2017
Maybe have Lilo develop a crush on Ash in the remake? It happened on a crossover Pokemon and Stitch! story on Deviantart, but not with Lilo.
GXY-2013 chapter 7 . 2/14/2017
Never mind, you didn't forget.
GXY-2013 chapter 6 . 2/14/2017
I am hoping that in a rewrite, you won't forget about Experiment 628.
Rocker on chapter 38 . 2/10/2017
Eh, I'm just giving suggestions for where to take the direction of the next story. Recently read your profile again, and decided to put a few seeds of a story in your head, and see what might grow.

So, I'm guessing you're going to stick with the whole experiments being genetic mixtures of Pokemon, right? And since Hamsterwheel(Dr. Jock Hamster Viel!) worked with him, we know he'll know about where the source of the genetic material came from, correct? The only difference would be how they're reintroduced into the Pokemon universe in the story. So, let's work up from that.

So, we all know the Hamster will want revenge, yes? So you my have him break out, like in this one, but I doubt it'll be in the same way. Probably going to involve that other experiment, the traitor one. Hmm, if he doesn't want to reveal himself, I believe he would send mercenaries with the promise of fortunes to goad them on. Or he could send some robots, robots solve a lot of problems. Perhaps build some new version of them to break into the prison, and break out a multitude of prisoners, so that the Galactic counsel doesn't know who it was that was meant to be broken out specifically, as well as cause disorder among the counsel as to what to do about the outbreak, and trying to recapture all the escaped inmates. Hmm, maybe have the robots infiltrate the prison and take out the guards in all areas, and then after securing Hamsterwheel in an escape pod, exploding the base, leaving the presumption that nobody survived, leaving a clear path for the gerbil.

So, after however you do it for the rodent escaping, then you'll have to make a catalyst for them all having to go to the Pokemon universe. Maybe some form of genetic homesickness, but that wouldn't create the right scene for a full-fledged story to grow on. Maybe have it be Hamsterwheel having a backup plan for not destroying the experiments, perhaps a genetic code he used to sabotage the experiments DNA, making it so that they revert back to their original coding every so often. Probably has some form of migration feature to send them back to where their DNA came from. Although, it probably wouldn't effect Stitch and Reuben at the least, cause we all know that crazy furball wasn't in on making them, seeing as he didn't know what 625 was in the movie. Hmm... These are just suggestions, I'm not ordering you to use my ideas. Heh, by now you probably have a whole plan for the story written down already. I doubt anything I write will affect what you do in the story.

Eh, hope that the remake will come soon, and please keep all the funniness in it! Funny parts are fun, and since this story is funny, that means it's fun! Well, if you suddenly get struck with inspiration for posting the first chapter of the remake, I'll be looking for it! Just keep this one up as reference, K? Until next review, this has been Rocker, telling you to rock on! Tally-ho, Romeo!
Martin chapter 38 . 12/18/2016
When are you going to bring out the rework of this story?
Rocker on chapter 38 . 10/17/2016
If the story isn't complete, why did you put 'complete' at the top thingy majig?
Rocker on chapter 37 . 10/17/2016
I really want Spooky now. Imagine the uses!
Rocker on chapter 36 . 10/16/2016
Already know he's Cyber. Can't wait!
Rocker on chapter 35 . 10/16/2016
Just remember to give Angel her own chapter. That would be AWESOME to read!
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