Wow, this is really good! It even sounds like something that would in any superhero universe!

A somber work, but I do like how Kelly and Maz take care of Guy. Keeping with shows characteristics, Kelly being the "older" bossy sister and Maz just being a bro.

So sweet

Aw, poor Guy. At 12 he should definitely not be missing copious amounts of sleep. This was cute. :)

Though if this is starting to happen all the time and his parents don't catch on that their son is sleep deprived, I'm a bit cheesed off at them...

You certainly have skills, but I would have liked it if it had ended somewhere along the lines of "And he closed his eyes for the last time..." or something like that. but that's just my cliché opinion.

Man, major Guy!Whump, but I like it. Very well done and believable. I like Kelly being all overprotective, and the bit with the cow was funny.

cool story!

Lol. I actually thought this was sweet. D COW

Nice story!

This is sad and cute and wonderful and very possible, and Maz and Kelly taking care of a half-broken Guy is wonderful...

Holy crap, this is easily my favorite SheZow fic written by another author that I've seen anywhere online. The problem Guy has in this story is something that I had pondered about as well, hence why my stories took the direction they did around the 13th or 14th one. The idea of Guy potentially getting messed up by sleep deprivation is scarier than any of the other aspects of being SheZow. A person can die faster from sleep deprivation than from dehydration or starvation.

I particularly enjoyed the dialogue between Maz and Guy at the end. Felt really natural and it was amusing as well. Again, good stuff.

Awww, this is really sweet. What a nice character moment! I hope you'll consider writing more.