yogi almost got the jackpot... kkkkkk

I thought you have another fiction named Moonlily, a sequel for this one. Don't you ?

I really like this story, I've read it at least 4 times. :)

That was awesome.

I love the pair and how on point Yogi was.

This is so great! I just wish there was more to the story! They're just so adorable!

Oh wow this is probably the best Yogi x Gareki fanfic I've read yet (and I'm pretty sure I've read almost all of them on here) Its really well written and the story flows really well, love it!

Ooooh I want more ;) and I loved the ending xD

Noooo the sheep is ruining it xD

Hahaha the sheep caught them in the end. How delightful. This was very sweet with a great layer of sensuality near the end. I enjoyed it a lot.

Awawa This was so sweeeeeeet ;v; I loved it so much! Than your for writing such a pearl!
Keep up the good work!

I'm suspicious that Yogi, under his cheerful countenance, was secretly aiming for Gareki's reaction when he didn't allow Gareki to run away and even pulled his Prince Charming smile on him. Of course the touch under Gareki's shirt combined with the kiss kind of makes it highly likely that Yogi was hoping for some kind of response from Gareki. (He probably would have been satisfied if Gareki just didn't do anything and fell asleep in Yogi's embrace like that, but was pleasantly surprised when Gareki took it a bit further.) ...Not that I'm complaining.

Let's hope the sheep doesn't tell everyone on the ship. That'd be really embarrassing ... at least, for Gareki it would be ahahaha.

Thanks for the lovely oneshot. You have to love those sheep. c:

Absolutely lovely. Loved the writing and the whole thing is so incredibly sweet;; You really managed to write both Yogi and Gareki absolutely IC 3 Congratulations! I was looking forward to the sequel but it seems it's not online anymore, I assume you have no intention to continue it for some reason? Such a pity, your writing is lovely!

Oooh, this gave me some great shivers. Finally found a fanfic' that's really sweet yet not OOC at all. I love your style (I'm addicted to sweet bed-scenes too much and this one was really... enough to make me melt .) Thank you for writing that

Brilliant! I'm italian and I'm spending my time reading these fanfictions in english cause I love them tooooo much Unfortunately I can't understand every word but enough to understand the story :3
I loved your fiction, really! The end is super AHAH EPIC SHEEP! I laughed x'D
Elly

Aaaah, my first Karneval fic, and 'twas so brilliantly written *sways happily* I just loved every bit of it! You wrote the situation and Gareki and Yogi's characters so perfectly, uwahhh. It was so sweet! The kissing was unexpected, but there are zero complaintssss OuO Excellent story!