I loved it! Honestly I'm in Henley deprivation after rewatching both NYSMs and really really annoyed that Isla Fisher isn't coming back for the third one either. I just really want Henley and Daniel to end up together! Is that wrong of me? IS THAT TOO MUCH TO ASK FOR?!

That was really good, I can't wait for the second movie to come out

AMAZING MORE!

I loved it!

"Really? I think this card suits you perfectly right now. You didn't have to choose if I already which it was. After all, wasn't it you who told me never to ask stupid questions?" She laughed. At his expense, he knew.

I was wondering if you might to say ' You didn't have to choose if I already knew which was. After all, wasn't it you who told me never to ask stupid questions?"

Sorry I just thought I point that out, since I wondered about that.

I liked it.
Well I loved it.
It's too late for me to think straight enough to explain how much I loved this story. So yeah :P

So the beginning was perfect and flawlessly J. Daniel Atlas. And it was beautiful, and kind of exactly how I pictured his thoughts. A lot of people have trouble writing Danny but you got him.

Your sort-of drunk Henley was a little off of how I think of her, but she got the least amount of characterization, so I think that's fair.

And the middle was confusing. But Daniel was still perfect.

And the end was amazing too, and this is one of the best Henley fics I've read.

HauntedSilver

I liked this one.

I loved that Daniel thinks Henley is spectacular and that maybe one day he will tell her. And I love that Henley comes over to him, so she can drive him wild and get him to agree to do something so she'd choose him.

I also thought their personalities were spot on and that Daniel's thoughts were very enjoyable.

Thank you for the great story. I look forward to the next one you write.

Whoa. I loved this so much! Especially these lines:
A waitress passed with a tray full of beer tumblers and he grabbed one before he lost his mind.
She had a way of reeling him in.
There was a heat pooling in the pit of his stomach and he wished it was the crappy beer but knew it wasn't. It was something that made his blood boil more than 5% abv ever could.
He looked up to see her perched on the table of the booth he was sitting in, stripping the cards back and forth in her hands. Simply the wording of that thought almost pulled him into a daze of thoughts of stripping something else and it occurred to him that he should probably get a hard drink down his throat soon if he wanted a valid excuse for thinking what he'd been thinking for the past couple of minutes.

Just awesome job, overall. :)

That was so cute! I loved it!

Awesome oneshot! I'm really glad you decided to post this! There aren't many stories in this category. You really captured Henley and Atlas's personality. Very good!