Reviews for Visitor
Sora Akuma chapter 63 . 7/12
I know this is super late but this story was amazing. It keeps you on the edge of ur seat and the ending was perfect.
sabrina9393 chapter 7 . 7/11
I need to stop using speech to text setting in my phone when writing reviews it's horrible with spelling.
sabrina9393 chapter 7 . 7/11
I am a fan of earned power and respect so it's a little disappointing how flipint Harry is with using that which he hasn't eurned. but I do understand this is fanfiction and a writer rights to express themselves and for the sake of writing not to please a reader swim.
The Scorpio Lady Enchantress chapter 1 . 6/3
Mmmmm ur good
rigger42 chapter 23 . 5/26
I don't get spilling all those details just because Ron and Hermione say they are okay with the Dark. Is Harry going on trust of Marvolos look in their minds? Because he's handing over lots of details instead of saying that certain info is restricted to marked followers.
rigger42 chapter 8 . 5/26
How did he use the mirrors wouldn't they be with his trunk?
kawaiGaby chapter 63 . 5/4
I just finished re-reading this story, and it’s still as amazing as ever! Now I just have to wait for the rest or « In willing sacrifice », looking forward or it ;) !
TheBlueMoonRose chapter 14 . 4/24
I hope Voldemort gets his decidedly handsome human looks back
01chupacabra chapter 1 . 4/8
The clock was at the same time as mine!
SapphireKageKyuura chapter 7 . 4/1
I do like bad ass Harry Potter better than weak and gullible Harry Potter. It makes the story more interesting and so very amusing. Keep up the good work. I'll have to put this on my favorite list so I can read it later.
Guest chapter 63 . 3/29
Das war einfach perfekt!
Bluewolf80 chapter 63 . 3/20
What a masterpiece! You should be very proud!

The only criticism I have is that it was lagging at times so I skimmed a bit. It could have been trimmed. There were parts that were repetitive. While the ending was fine, I would have liked to have seen what happened to the students and teachers from Hogwarts. That battle felt rushed.

Once again, excellent job! I enjoyed this so much.
Bluewolf80 chapter 53 . 3/19
This whole part is screwy. Why couldn’t they get 3 DEs to apporate them to a secluded part of Hogsmead?
Bluewolf80 chapter 50 . 3/19
I’ve been wondering about the Dursleys forever! I’m hoping to hear more about Hermione soon. Honestly, has no one thought to check McGonagall for mind alteration?
FlowersBite chapter 16 . 2/13
Oh she is going to be so sorry that she put Harry through that pain once his boyfriend finds out.
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